Uh idk what happen but i cant get to the last chapter everything was great up until now so i really wanna finish the last chapter. Thanks

Sorry for having to review myself...I guess I can't really write an AN after this story is completed, but here is the answer to the question that "Anonymous" asked. If you use a proper katana, then the Kamiya Kasshin Ryu could kill someone, but if you use a sakabatou, then even the Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu cannot kill. Maybe this is my opinion, but I believe that there isn't a style that is labelled "killing" or "protecting", but it is the person who wields it that determines its nature. If Kenshin could protect so many people with the Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu, then why shouldn't it be passed down?

Er... Why would the master of the Kamiya Kashin-a martial arts style meant to protect-pass down techniques from a style with the sole purpose of killing?

Oh my gawd the watermelon part got me laughing so hard! XD I love this fanfic up until now.

very cool. i also just finished your other lh fic um hinata memories and cant wait for you shin/kei fic. you are very talented in your work and i just cant wait for it nor the forgotten promise fic you mention. thank you for all the stories your have written and good luck in your future work. DM_

and so we say a sad goodbye to this fic as it concludes and we are soon to say hello to the hopefully just as good sequel

Congrats Motoko. I loved "Another Promise" I cant wait for the conclusion. Ill review in the conclusion good luck. Ja ne te Motoko-chan

GREAT STORY HOPE U MAKE THE SEQUAL SOON!

Fabulous work on the wrap up of this great tale! I can't wait to see how you do the next story. The last para with the kiss was excellent! Kudos!

A little short, but very nice. Too bad that the sequel is looking to be dark, it'd be nice if Keitaro could continue to have a happy life.

I have read every chapter each one better than the last. I love how you captured the Love Hina Series especially how fluidly you added Akiko. Also I love you expressed Motoko's feelings it seemed almost as if she could be realted to all of us. You brought true dimension to this story. No matter what anyone tells you keep on writing this is your best work yet and I hope to see the epilouge soon lol.

thanx

Andrius Xelphin Noble Gallant

I really like the story it truly captured the hinata residence and how Motoko felt about keitaro. Also I really like the use of japanese terms I myself i am still trying to learn japanese lol. also if you know a few terms e-mail me them if that would be cool it would help me learn more thanx

Spirit Alleron

good story and sad to see it end. at least there's gonna be a sequel and can't wait for it to start. keep up the good work

Great story...