Reviews for Where Would I Hide Without the Mask?
aragornlover chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
I want more!*whines*
akj222 chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
oh. cool story! i'm liking it... update as soon as you can!
link-smitten chapter 3 . 10/17/2003
link-smitten chapter 2 . 10/17/2003
Oh, how sad! I'm reading on!
aragornlover chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
I want more*whines*hehehehehehe
silverpanther123 chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
write more! it's really interesting...poor ella... :) update soon
link-smitten chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Wow! You must continue! I love it!
Rosa Cotton not logged in chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
Please continue this, I want to see what happens!
erialarrowman chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
That...was...excellent! The plot was good and I love that idea. You left the story at the perfect place. There are so many possibilities for the development of this plot, so you can just go with the flow and not have to worry about getting caught up in a snag anywhere. At the end, you were a bit vague about Ella's punishment but you developed the characters just enough to allow a hint of their nature to poke through, which is perfect for the beginning of any story. You established the main plot very well, indeed. A few minor grammatical errors but nothing blatently obvoius. Just a few irksome little sentence snags that even the best stumble over every now and then.
Emily Levine chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
I think that your story was very organized and makes sense.I do wonder what would happen to Ella if the mask hadnt fell.
singinstrawberri chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
ooh! i like it! it describes it better right after the ball then other ppl. please hurry to update!
MapleRose chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
I like the title. keep writing!

congrats on getting the part, is it the one you wanted? is olive like the olive in ella enchanted?
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