Reviews for Pretty Blood
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Poor Hikari D: Waking up to that...
Isis2990 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Me like being in his mind, please don't think i'm strange i'm just a sadist wuahahahahahaha XD
MysterySC chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
It's great...but

sorry for the comments, there not meant to be offencive, just my idle opinion

this doesn't fit Yami no Bakura to me- it reminds me of -Umbra- no Marik- who's all about killing

as far as i know {or actually care really, it's horror-loving Mystery...}

A...i mean, Yami no Bakura is really a blood thirsty guy, but he wouldn't kill his prey, plus i agree with Nadako-Mika who said there wasn't enough blood...a.d.d.e.d...guts, or torturing in the story, which means...not Yami no Bakura

Yami no Bakura KoT-SoS-MoPaT-Darkness

-Umbra- no Marik Killing, Blood, rambling- randomness

you should just change the name to umbra {or yami as you might say, but i don't considering he isn't a spirit of the Sennin Rod- or it'd be Hight Priest Seth} no Marik because it really doesn't fit much of Yami no Bakura

This kinda reminds me of one of those crazy killer things, where the killer hates some sound and thus kills everyone {including the cause}

it is good, and the bakura's hair part fit him...only a little though, he doesn't think that fondly of Bakura's hair from what i know, because in ejypt he's got the same messy hair

i think it's really good, but it fit Umbra no Marik too much

keep writing though:D {you're better then me..}
Marik's Mistress chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
Is this suppose to be a one shot? It was ok I guess. Well if it is'n than update please.
Thief12344 chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
O.o...Okay?WHAT KIND OF SICK PERSON ARE YOU WRITING SOMETHING LIKE THAT!YOU MAKE HIM SOUND LIKE YAMI MARIK!GOD!(growls)(Takes a deep breath)Okay,sorry about that outburst.I do have to say that was'.Will you please forgive me?PLEZ?(big google eyes)I'll give you a cookie.
AmerReject chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
i love this dude
he f*ckin crazy (like me)lovin it write more
Krazy Tafi chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
Mabi: * looks at Tafi evily*

Tafi: O.o *runs*

Mabi: MUHAHAHAHA! *chases*

Nat: It was great! Reminds me of silent hill somehow... weird...

Mabi: Here pretty kitty...


Nat: Eh! You two, quit it! Don't make me get the hose!
Silver Dragon Iron Claws chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
I love the gore!

I care less from who it comes from as long as there's BLOOD! ;;

Cool story write more like it!
Nadako-Mika chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Nadako: Un... That was...short, good, but short...

Mika: *furrows brows* Couldn't you have at least added a tad bit more gore and description?

Nadako: Shut up Mika.. That much blood is enough

Mika: *cowers and mumbles*

Nadako: *claps* too bad it wasn't a bit longer. Well gotta go! Ja!

:: Nako-Ko-chan & Tama-Mika-sama!
squigglything chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
Hi, hey that is so col, bakura can be insane if you want to, its ok i dont really mind anyways it was a really cool story!

From Carmen5
S. A. Bonasi chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Well, sorry if it seems like I'm nit picking, but I had a question.

You write Yami Bakura's thought process like this:

'Her pretty blonde hair is all messed up. Hair just like Hikari's hair. How dare you have hair like Hikari, His hair is pretty, so pretty, don't take it. It's mine all mine. He's mine.'

I think that you were going for the insane effect, but it doesn't really strike me as Yami Bakuraish. He's a brilliant speaker, so incoherant rambling doesn't really seem to fit him.

If you want hash out ideas with me, my email address is .
The Helldragon chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Personally, I'm with that other reviewer. Oh sure, you can SAY Yami Bakura's a psychopath, but it's a lot more fun to dig deep. Why does he enjoy it? Why does he enjoy the thrill of murder, the ecstacy of watching his victim's lifeblood puddle near his feet? What makes him tick? These are all questions you must answer.

And of course, it's more horrifying if one has a machine that goes "ping".
B0nz-Ein chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
O scary and freaky

*shivers*i got the chill...

great fic

Elmidol chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
this is great! i'll print it when i get on my other computer-that one has the printer. nice. i love blood too. yup yup. by the way, i was wondering if you would read my horror fic, it's called Soul Of Darkness. It'll have a sequel. by the way, could you do one of these for yami Malik? it'd be cools. well, great job. Ja'nae

S. A. Bonasi chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Eh... I could never really see Yami Bakura just going out and killing someone. It kind of contradicts his character, particularly concerning his past.


Don't be me wrong, he's a right bastard. And I have seen him kill a few times, but a lot less than you would think. I mean, in the manga he killed Kotsuzuka Ghost. And in Ancient Egypt he killed those guys who tried to kill him, but other than that...

I don't know, this doesn't really strike me as Yami Bakura. Actually, if you hadn't told me, I would have sworn you were writing about Yami no Malik. He's more of the randomly kill people, laugh about it, and then randomly kill anyone who comes near his omote. (Mean's surface. hikari isn't canon, but I hear omote is. It's used in the same context.) Poor Ishtar-sama... He really shouldn't have threated Malik...

Then again, Yami Bakura did turn that teacher who bullied Bakura into a doll... ::Snark.::

Forgive me if this isn't the best review, it's merely my thoughts. I think you should explore Yami Bakura's character further. Don't just portray him as a stereotypical evil insane villian, really get into his psyche.
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