Reviews for My Playground Love
Don-Jam chapter 3 . 9/18/2008
Now, that was Cool. I love Martin at the end there, but I'd think he be a bit more like:

Martin: "WHAT WHERE YOU DOING? Where You Doing WHAT I Think You Were Doing?..."

Natalie: "...I think they Were"


Martin: "WHAT! She is your Little SISTER David!"

Darlene: "AM NOT!"

David: "Sister?...We'r she can Not be!"

Martin: "You were there at her Activation!"

David: "So what?"


Martin: "Ok, she Not your sister, but she IS MY! So The Law say that I Have To KILL YOU NOW!"

Darlene & Natalie: "RUN DAVID! RUN!"

Marting Runing afer David weth a smile, at the end of a Fun day.

But that jest me and I'm NOT good at who am I to say? I Love what you did weth this, innocent love. I' have like to see what Man and Dad think of this? We can see Martin like it.

If Google Translater is working: "BUEN TRABAJO!"(And IF it is NOT working...I DID NOT SAY THAT about your ) Thank You for this.
Lise chapter 3 . 8/8/2007
Wow. That was really really sweet.

And handled in the same innocence that David always carries.

Really nice. :)
David Swinton chapter 3 . 9/23/2006
Bueno, ya he terminado la historia. ¡Qué bonito! Un amor eterno, sin altibajos, siempre tan fuerte como el primer día, el amor más fuerte que jamás haya existido.

Había pensado en escribir un fic en español para los posibles usuarios de la pagina que hablen o lean este bonito idioma. La verdad es que me lo has puesto difícil...

S ludos y gracias por estas historias tan buenas.

Un amigo español.

Saludos de

David Swinton.
David Swinton chapter 2 . 9/23/2006
Bueno bueno...

Ya he leído el capítulo 2 con la ayuda de mi amigo JAWS. abreviatura de Job Access With Speech...

Voy a por el tercero. De todas formas eso de la activación es un poco lío, menos mal que la familia tiene poca gente que sí no pueden estar medio día activando a la cría...
David Swinton chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
U, esto se pone interesante...

Sigo leyendo atentamente.

Estoy enganchao a tus historias...

Soy un mechafriki...

PD: es una broma lo del mechafriki.
cepaul518 chapter 3 . 10/5/2003
Aw, such a wonderful little story. I liked that movie a lot. Very good, thanks for posting!
Matrix Refugee chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
Aw! I was hoping you'd put this on ff.n after you posted the draft version of chapter one on the Yahoo! group message board. There's a need for fics about Darlene specifically (not just David, not just Mecha-childs in general), and you have fullfilled that need very adequately. I'm looking forward to seeing how this new little one fits in with the Swintons and how David (and Martin, too) will adjust to having a little sister. Monica needs a little girl to dress up and fuss over. And I could imagine Darlene getting around Henry's practicalness, which is probably what kept him from imprinting David.

May I link this to my website? (I know I hardly need to ask: I just do it to be polite)