I really like this fic, hope you continue some day!

I know you havent updated recently but i really love your story and if you ever get the chamce please continue writing and if you are positive you wont bve able to update it ever please consider letting it be adopted i really enjoy your amazing writing and marvolous plot so if you are planning on taking it up again please keep it we can wait :) but this story also deserves to be finished so if you dont have any intition of finishing it please allow a worthy fan of your story give it an ending that all your reviewers deserve. thank you :)

Seriously update this story please. Me poor heart just stopped when I realised that there wasn't any Next button! DO UPDATE SOON!

I'm going to stop reading here, because the characters other than Harry are really annoying. All of your characters are 2 dimensional and never grow or change, and that makes them predictable. Your Harry is too angstly compared to cannon 6th year harry who is a bit more cocky and headstrong. I did enjoy the plot even if the premise was weak... a spell anyone could have said that was accessable by teenagers? no power requirements it rituals... just abra cadabra poof. All that said I Hate Ginny, and Snape so your positive portrayal of them without any depth is toxic to me. Your character depth is like a rain pond. For example Ron, only goal become famous, jealous of people who out shine him. Done. Humans are more complex than that and it angers me when good authors cheapen stories like that. Also I hate the fact you reply to reviews in your story, one or two is fine but when readers have to scroll through a fourth of the page to get to the next chapter, its ridiculous. Oh and your oc and his factory scream Gary stu, and it was painful for me to read your " cleverly hidden backstory " in the ministers intro and Snapes one on one talk.
Make your characters more memorable and have them suck less.

I hope you still plan to finish this story. I'm really enjoying the characters.

"Except this time we're saving two worlds," Harry continued.

Well, if Harry continued, will the story not continue? Has your muse gone on holiday or been traded for a muse to be named later? We meet a new character and, and, and...inquiring minds must know. Hey, Luna! Com'ere, will ya?

I have to say, this is pretty awesome. I love how ANGRY Harry is. It's extremely amusing. XD I really do hope you update this again.

This was quite uninspiring. Your Harry is rather arrogant himself and quite OOC.

Nothing particularly wrong with the story, in fact compared to the usual stuff on the site, it's quite well-written. The issue is with, primarily, your devotion to EMPHASIS in such a distracting manner, it's hard to take the characters seriously when everyone is at high alert drama, all the time, at everything that happens. Also, Harry's retorts really aren't smart or shocking enough to render people speechless to the point of goldfish impressions.

But that's just my opinion. I'm as much of a rank amateur as yourself, so it hardly matters what I say anyway.

Best of luck,
Gatonio.

The terrifyingly sad moment when you realize the story you been reading hasn't been updated in years. Sigh...

Please, please, please! You said you've finished the last chapters of this story long long long time ago and how I hope I could read it! I know you want to get the first part right so that you can post the ending, but you haven't post ANYTHING for nearly two years! Please, I don't care whether you've done that part, I just want to read the ending. Would you please just post it so that readers like I could have get some idea about how this story would get to? Sorry about my English but I just so so so love your story that not being able to see it finish makes me sad.

I like the alternate universe. Interesting turn of events. THink about continuing.

I really love you fic, you're continued?

sorry for my english...

Am I confusing this story with another? I thought Ginny was expelled second year for what happened with the chamber...

Entertaining story if a bit confused at times, I do hope you come back to continue it.

While I realized that you seemed to have made a mistake with the cloak it could have easily been explained that the one Draco had was a fake made by Voldemort to get Harry to claim it.