Reviews for Vocare Prabia
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 2 . 7/13/2022
Well this is interesting. So they’re be two Harry’s and this alternate Harry is clumsy like our Harry’s Neville is.
archangelazraelson chapter 5 . 3/12/2022
could u please space out chapter heading and the disclaimer/ shout-out section of the pages gets confusing good so far.
Eragon135790 chapter 25 . 2/28/2022
veritaserum isnt the answer to everything, its even relatively easy to stop others from being able to use the information given, hell even if you give them answers that they are perfectly able to understand, if you formulate it correctly they would still not be able to use the unformation because the answer was formulated out of context or some such.
Eragon135790 chapter 15 . 2/28/2022
good, would ahve hated if harry suddenly was all nice to someone he never met.
Eragon135790 chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
im happy that harry isnt close to ron and hermione, snape being somewhat nice is done well, he is not too nice or anything but not a total git as well.
Eragon135790 chapter 10 . 2/28/2022
ok, mc is stupid, its so obvious that he is in another dimension and he just reacts like that?
Eragon135790 chapter 9 . 2/28/2022
like the ff so far, if lilly is written well i coudl accept mc SLOWLY getting closer to her, still not for james though, that guy is stupid, a bully, racist(in some way) and more that i dont want to think about.
Eragon135790 chapter 3 . 2/28/2022
ok, that was fun to watch, hope harry ownt really get close to his parents, his mother is probably way too overbearing and james... that guy is a stupid idiot, 'nough said.
FIREWOLF chapter 47 . 6/9/2021
NOOOO, IT CANNOT END HERE! *Sharp intake of breath* **chokes on breath** ***has horrible coughing fit*** WAHHH PLEASE CONTINUE you said, I WILL RESORT TO GROVELING
Please, please...please?
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2021
Thanks then to Rose.
A friend called chapter 4 . 6/9/2021
You are doing amazing!
FireWolf chapter 3 . 6/9/2021
Wow! I love your work! I am firewolf - the reviewer for the prologue that said that I could not give you my account name yet. You both do an amazing job! Hope your teacher does not make you restart you potions(work)!
A reviewer chapter 1 . 6/9/2021
When is this taking place?
Also, why would pettigrew do that...
Sorry not ready to reveal my account name yet
Blossominwild chapter 9 . 5/10/2021
a very dumb story.
Afaettle chapter 8 . 4/18/2021
I'm sorry I can only read this far. I'm leaving
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