How did Harry not feel Snape in his mind? So Harry configured a snake. Cute.

So where is this universe Harry?

Uh, Ginny was suspended?

Well this is interesting. So they’re be two Harry’s and this alternate Harry is clumsy like our Harry’s Neville is.

could u please space out chapter heading and the disclaimer/ shout-out section of the pages gets confusing good so far.

veritaserum isnt the answer to everything, its even relatively easy to stop others from being able to use the information given, hell even if you give them answers that they are perfectly able to understand, if you formulate it correctly they would still not be able to use the unformation because the answer was formulated out of context or some such.

good, would ahve hated if harry suddenly was all nice to someone he never met.

im happy that harry isnt close to ron and hermione, snape being somewhat nice is done well, he is not too nice or anything but not a total git as well.

ok, mc is stupid, its so obvious that he is in another dimension and he just reacts like that?

like the ff so far, if lilly is written well i coudl accept mc SLOWLY getting closer to her, still not for james though, that guy is stupid, a bully, racist(in some way) and more that i dont want to think about.

ok, that was fun to watch, hope harry ownt really get close to his parents, his mother is probably way too overbearing and james... that guy is a stupid idiot, 'nough said.

NOOOO, IT CANNOT END HERE! *Sharp intake of breath* **chokes on breath** ***has horrible coughing fit*** WAHHH PLEASE CONTINUE

PLEASE...as you said, I WILL RESORT TO GROVELING
Please, please...please?

Thanks then to Rose.

You are doing amazing!
FIREWOLF OUT

Wow! I love your work! I am firewolf - the reviewer for the prologue that said that I could not give you my account name yet. You both do an amazing job! Hope your teacher does not make you restart you potions(work)!