Reviews for Vocare Prabia
StormBrisingr chapter 47 . 2/10/2009
THIS IS REALLY GOOD.!.
Voakands chapter 47 . 2/10/2009
A comment for the last chapter. Apt that Dumbledore's image should take the place of his counterpart the moment the man reveals "the boss" - yes, I'm accusing Dumbledore of being the head honcho.
Letifer chapter 47 . 1/28/2009
I hope to see an update soon
Merrymow chapter 47 . 1/17/2009
I was wondering when you're going to update?
puregarnet chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Love it! Please update soon!
hpotterfan2047 chapter 47 . 1/10/2009
this is amazing. uve got some real talent. i love the AU with the two ron's and hermione's. i cant wait for the next chapter
DoubleTime chapter 47 . 12/30/2008
I love the humor you put in your story! It makes it so much more iteresting. I hope that you will update soon! It is really really good!
Wayward Fool chapter 47 . 12/26/2008
Ooh, I like this story! Interesting concept, it's a nice plot. I love your characters. Please find a way for Sirius, Lily, James and Remus to go to the 'original' universe! (remus because he'd be all lonesome, and because both Remus' would have company on the full moon :D)

Fool
Bahzad chapter 47 . 12/26/2008
Good chapter.
wthisthis chapter 36 . 12/22/2008
omg. that was a big twist. a lot of people say there's a twist, but that was truly unexpected. the ministry is so...
wthisthis chapter 15 . 12/21/2008
haha. i loved that line. you're a blood hippogriff & the grass is pink. god. no matter what, things always suck for harry. & it sucks that you really can't have it any other way.

yeah, still have a lot more to read, but loving it so far.
friggincreeps chapter 47 . 12/18/2008
Wow this is good...update!
Draeconin chapter 14 . 12/5/2008
Back story should be told, in my opinion, a little bit at a time. Three chapters of back story in a row is too much. I found it an irritating interruption of the story. If it needs to be told (and I can see that it could), then I think it should be told in logical time line: in other words, at the beginning of the story, just before coward-Harry was murdered, with small snippets (one to four sentences) being repeated as part of the 'recall' BWL Harry is having while he's unconscious - whilst being a reminder to the reader at the same time.
Draeconin chapter 8 . 12/5/2008
Ah. I had forgotten about your prologue. It made so little sense, when I read it. Now that the info is in context, it does, of course.
Draeconin chapter 4 . 12/5/2008
Okay, so Hermione and Ron summon BWL Harry from his dimension to theirs. You say nothing of a transfer (and from the description of the spell, there wouldn't be one), so where's the cowardly Harry?
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