Honestly, when he decides not to give the kitten to Ron it’s because he thinks Ron will neglect it. Sure Draco won’t hurt it, but neither will Ron and he has no reason to believe Draco would take good care of a pet that he supposedly cares about.

This is retarded- Harry combines with alternate harry for a chapters worth of content, and then after that he gets a kitten he “falls in love with” and immediately decides to give it to his nemesis for shits and giggles to fill up another chapter. If the damn kitten isn’t going to be significant in any way, don’t add the thing into the story.

Why in the name of god is harry not pissed at hermione? She literally just performed some random spell that she didn’t even know and summoned him from his fucking UNIVERSE with no way back.

wtf? An advanced summoning charm is summoning something that is lost without specifying or knowing what you are trying to summon?

This is horrible. No wonder you never finished it even after five years of barely putting out 20,000 words a year. I wouldn't have wasted my time actually writing a conclusion to this trash either.

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Okay, I’m just gonna day I cried when I realized this wasn’t finished. I actually cried. This story is utterly amazing, and I honestly don’t know if I can read something else after reading this. I know it’s been literally 10 years since this was last updated, but I want you to know that it is amazing, and I’ll definitely reread this all the time, even though I know I’ll be disappointed when it’s incomplete. 3

I’m sorry but how the hell was that philosophical? It wasn’t even a opinion! It was just a couple of facts that Harry spew! Sorry but I like philosophy and art, and to say something like that then claim that it’s art is just infuriating. It also makes Harry seem like what the AU Neville is- a prat who’s seen as perfect. But in this case it’s worse since it seems like the writer is trying to convince us that Harry is fucking God. It just pushes my buttons. Especially since the way Neville is. It just makes Harry seem like a hypocrite. And Jesus, why did you bring Ginny into this? And why not tell us the pairing? Us readers like to know what we’re getting into. If your doing a pairing that I don’t want to read, tell me so I can leave. I don’t want to waste my time reading a great story to find out I can’t read the rest because I fucking hate th pairing and rather pull out my own eyes then have to drag myself through the horrible pairing and their stupid romance. I’m sorry if this was fucking rude (if more like is) but I honestly don’t believe you’ll ever read this and plus it really is just an idiot’s opinion.

So inconsistent it gets confusing. At the end if the chapter, is it original Harry or alternate Harry in original world? And what happened to the Harry of the alternate world? Did I miss something?

What a bullshit story.

Bit over dramatic at the end but NOW it's a proper story. Everything is progressing nicely. Well paced. Excited to get to the rest of it actually.

Well the story is evolving. There's simply too much poured into everyone's reactions. There's no one that's subtly shocked. It's all-or-nothing awe.
Nice to see Neville as Lockhart, that's probably what a proper 11-year-old steeped in fame would grow up like: entitled, spoilt, and a braggart. He'll do well to have some humility knocked into him. Good job shaping that character. You've got a good story on your hands.

It changed so much from the beginning. You've got grammar and punctuation down so the story reads nicely, but it makes me focus on content that much more. A bit of groundwork for coming chapters I hope? It can't be the only difference between these two worlds is that Harry and Neville were switched? Only one way to find out...