|Reviews for Legendary Hunter: Red Ring Rico|
| Karasout chapter 12 . 4/7/2005
first of all i think your chapters are a little short but it's a very...interesting story. you need to work on your spelling a little bit though. Update Soon!
| dark-nova chapter 12 . 12/22/2003
Yes, this is a bit of a late review.
It's good to read. There are few, if any, errors on spelling or grammar.
However, there are conflicting points in this story involving the real storyline. Heathcliff witnessed Rico being possessed. Rico already had the Red Items (if you had seen the Ultimate Ending), and she didn't have the Kaladbolg. Rather, she had the Red Saber. Dark Falz was just merely the appearances of death. It's more like an entity, and she was possessed before entering that portal.
It's creative that you used the BGM titles of music for the chapter names.