|Reviews for Truth and Consequences|
| nim draug chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Awww, an interesting concept - very original :)xxx
| Spyke Raven chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
A very interesting follow-up to the previous story. I must confess I did think that Gimli and Legolas rushed in rather easily in 'Birds and Bees', but given the behaviour portrayed here, it all fits very nicely. Thanks for writing this.
| Lamiel chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Oh, Rose, this is so sweet! I didn't find it really sad-bittersweet, perhaps, but really touching and beautiful. The description of Gimli's heart, "and the shards divided again," and the rhythm of "Legolas said . . . Legolas said . . ." just beautiful. Very, very nice.
| Little My chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
What a great examination of the jealous nature of dwarves. This was heartbreaking - poor Legolas and Gimli. But I'm glad the dwarf paused to listen before he burst in on the two, axe a-swinging!
One of the parts I found the most effective, actually, was the repetition of "Legolas said". It was almost rhythmic, like a succession of painful blows to Gimli's heart as he overhears Legolas' anguish.
Very nice, and I'm glad it had a happy ending!
| ephedrine chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
eep, i'm sorry to say that when i first saw the summary i was like "WTH? GIMLI AND LEGOLAS!" and was a little bit disgusted...
but as i read your story, i found out that your style of writing was excellent _
in one part though, you kept writing "Legolas said, Legolas said, Legolas said" maybe you should change it a bit to make it more interesting...
| littlegreenleaf chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
Absolutely stunning! You did a wonderful, wonderful job on this!
| keekercatt chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
That was beautiful. I absolutely love your take on Legolas and Gimli, and I anxiously await more!
| lsdfjigslgfn chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
It's about time someone wrote this. Heh. LOVE IT SO MUCH!