|Reviews for An Officer And A Pokemon Master|
| GrandmasterRed chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Do you realize how many people you offended just now
I just remembered why
1. I never ship
2 why I stopped shipping people
| SuperHyperShadic3000 chapter 10 . 5/24/2013
HAHAHAHA! DIAMOND DALLAS PAGE, YOU GOT DDP'D MOTHERF*** ER!
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 12 . 11/9/2011
It's a good start to this story, but I really hate how you made Misty agree to help Team Rocket, just for her to get Ash back. That's not Misty that I'm used to.
Two years since last update? Doesn't look good for this fic!
| Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
| phantom5niper chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
i love this story and i hope it gets Completed its the best one i have read in a week keep up the good work.
| BraveEagle chapter 12 . 6/11/2009
Hm...very good fic, just some parts i would tone down the 'car talk' just a bit but nothing to make the fic lose it's credibility, the new pairing is a bonus, it's nice to see someone thinking outside the box.
Last update was...hm 12-29-08 ? Do you plan progress this fic or abandom it? It's hard to find GOOD fics with Ash in it without it being a yaoi fic or a fic with a lot of OC's with SuperCool-TM powers and pokemon to outshine the canon character, please don't abandom this, puppies will die.
Not so important Ps.: I don't like misty a lot too, and i hate gary and paul with a fiery passion as i hate yaoi D
| burgekev000 chapter 12 . 4/1/2009
Good story so fat. Keep it up.
| TJFS chapter 12 . 1/20/2009
Bonnie... and clyde. What Teh Funking Heck?
and for Ash... Misty gets kidnapped. I didn't beleive it. He's up shit creek, without a paddle.
and a brainwashing scheme.
There goes the canoe...
| Sam chapter 12 . 1/8/2009
Its u have to make a kissing scene between jenny and ash.i m waiting for that.
| XxDragonXxXSlayerxX chapter 12 . 1/7/2009
Well you have a lot of grammar errors. Most of them should be obvious so I won't point them out.
I do enjoy the rare pairing of the story though.
Also you are doing one of the biggest a author can make...
Never ever use numbers in place of the actual word.
Example of a very big no no
Hello, it has been 4 days since I last saw you Ash! Said Jenny
Here is how you properly do it
Hello, it has been four days since I last you Ash! Said Jenny
| DJ Rodriguez chapter 12 . 12/29/2008
Good to see this back up and running! Giovanni must have something elaborate and complex in order to wipe out Ash's mind. And Misty actually signing up for this scheme, now that was cool!
Officer Jenny getting her ideas from a video game, now that is original! Usually, heroes or heroines don't admit that some great ideas they have come from video games.
In a case, hope to see more chapters up soon! Keep it up!
| Inflamora Notoris chapter 12 . 12/29/2008
Ok Wat is with the bonnie and Clyde thing?
| Glenn M chapter 9 . 6/12/2007
Review for Chapter9
Tuesday, 12 June 2007
Yo, Glenn M. reviewing!
It's a small world-after all! You may have revealed that Jenny's mother was friends with Ash's mom, but the biggest mystery remains unsolved: Who is Ash's father? Many authors like have been speculating on who could the Master's dad be, and some of them come up with OCs for Ash's father. But right now, I'm relieved that the tension betwewn Jenny and her mother is gone, and that the authoritarian attitude of her mother has dissipated. I live in a democratic country, and I'll say this from my point of view: Parental authoritarianism is a CRIME. The reason behind the statement, I leave to your analytic thinking and ingenuity, which will always be rewarded with compliments from me and two thumbs up for coming up with such timeless classics!
| Glenn M chapter 8 . 6/12/2007
Review for Chapter8
Tuesday, 12 June 2007
Aw... just when the two are about to kiss... Whoever interrupts their time together will be dealt with harshly... by me! Team Rocket, Gary, Brock, Pikachu, or even Jenny's over-idealistic mother!
| Glenn M chapter 7 . 6/12/2007
Review for Chapter7
Tuesday, 12 June 2007
Hello, Glenn M. reviewing!
Aw, and I thought it's already the date proper in this chapter! But then again, that would be rushing. From the chapter plot, you've mentioned a lot of car brands, and I guess that you love cars, too. It also seems that the Elite Four has cars of either European or American origin. I was looking forward to at least one of them having a thing for Asian cars, notably Subaru. I remember that a Subaru was mentioned in one of your classics-"The Secret Admirer Mess Up".
Anyway, the date proper begins in the next chapter, but I can't expect that the date will go on smoothly. Ash is somewhat uneasy of zero crime rate in the Kanto and Johto regions for four days since the incident at Prof. Oak's lab. "Prepare for REAL trouble", Ash Ketchum!
Glenn M. signing out! More power; keep up the good work!