Reviews for Fortress Around The Heart
Dunthonwen chapter 22 . 4/14/2009
Oh man- that's just depressing. But good. But- MAN. You are a crazy good writer. I love this story. I would buy it as a book. Honestly. So well done.
Dunthonwen chapter 21 . 3/25/2009
Ah! Still Brilliant. That darn Baeron. Crazy man. Undterstandable, but crazy. . Poor Legolas... and poor Haldir. Poor everyone. Such a tale. haha. I'll read on later. Very well done. Thank you for writing! :]
Dunthonwen chapter 20 . 3/23/2009
Holy- Amazing chapter! So much to happen in each of these chapters and me left never knowing what in the world is going to happen. I really enjoy how you ended it. The fate, and bringing the cast along.

I really honestly understand both points of view- and I find it adorable that Baeron is going to help her. Oh. Man I would read on but it's time to sleep. Thanks for writing! ]
Dunthonwen chapter 19 . 3/23/2009
The beginning was sweet, adorable, and amazing.

The middle pretty much broke my heart.

And the end... wow. Never before had I thought of things like Heart, Wisdom, Fury, Hope, Trust, & Reason to be people.

Bloody Brilliant. ]
Dunthonwen chapter 18 . 3/20/2009
Too bad they look adorable and not dangerous. Humans suck. lol. Well at least the dumb humans. Too bad we also know some of their kind in our own lives, to be sure. Wowee. Well done. That circle scene was great. ]
Dunthonwen chapter 17 . 3/19/2009
Aww. oh man. the chapters just keep getting better and better. Unfortunately, I have read the day away! It is time to sleep! haha. Maybe I'll have good dreams from the reading. Thank you for writing. ] Well done again!
Dunthonwen chapter 16 . 3/19/2009
Wow... Just... wow. Poor Baeron though. But yay Irulan and Legolas! Gah. They are so adorable. I'm jealous. In a non jealous way because it's a story... and yet still jealous. haha. I think you might know what I mean, seeing as how you wrote it. ] Well done. Thanks for writing!
Dunthonwen chapter 15 . 3/19/2009
aww. Regret for getting food. Now I'm all curious as to what may have happened in the past with Baeron and Legolas that Haldir knew about. I'm sure due time will tell. Well written chapter once again. I just can't stop reading! haha. You wrote it slow, and I love you for it, but... for lack of better words I want to 'get to the good stuff' haha. But you always give just that little hint of the good stuff each chapter and leave off just in time for me to want more! haha. well done!
Dunthonwen chapter 14 . 3/19/2009
Oh wow. that is a good question. What to do if the roles were reversed. hmm. Wow. I'm so happy that they are finally at least partially together. They're so cute. ] I adore them, I really do. haha. ]
Dunthonwen chapter 13 . 3/19/2009
who! Yay! Crazy stuff there. No doubt that was mind blowing. Golly-gee. hah wow I just said Golly-gee. I blame that I have no words to describe how I feel. haha. Fantastic, really. I don't know how you do it. ]
Dunthonwen chapter 12 . 3/19/2009
Gah! My goodness! It's wonderful! You keep throwing in doozies that I never see coming, but it's utterly fantastic. ]
Dunthonwen chapter 11 . 3/19/2009
Whoaa. You did it again! I didn't expect that at all! Again! haha. That was so crazy! Man. I don't know what I would have done if that would have happened to me. O.o Well done!
Dunthonwen chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
Wow. I didn't see that turn of events coming either! Crazy stuff, in an incredibly good way! D I will read on! Thanks for writing!
Dunthonwen chapter 9 . 3/18/2009
Oh no! I didn't see that coming at all! I mean I thought it would become an issue, her lie about the fictional David, but I never thought that it would hurt Legolas so badly. Hmm. Wow. So very well written!
Dunthonwen chapter 8 . 3/18/2009
Wowee. Legolas certainly has the thoughts to ponder in this chapter! D Poor guy. I feel bad for both him and Irulan. Confusion at its finest. Well written!
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