Reviews for Darkness & Light 2: Personal Risks
tweaty chapter 2 . 11/10/2004
Hi there RJ! I've been planning to do this for a long time...so at last I got myself to write a review. :) What can I say? I've read loads of fanfiction, but your D&L trilogy remains the best I've ever read and my most favourite. It brightens my mood whenever I read it, touches something in the heart, you know. So I'd like to THANK YOU very much for writing this great piece. I'm afraid I've got no criticism to offer. ;)
Rosmerta chapter 7 . 8/19/2004
Enjoying my re-reading very much - and I love how you've intertwined your story into canon OotP. Terrific job! As always, your Snape is very believable and hasn't lost his edge (I love the love-potion brewing scene) - and yet I disagree with Maud about Snape being "not in the least lovable." Our Severus is CERTAINLY lovable!
Shoshi chapter 2 . 7/20/2004
He in chapter 2 of darkness and light2

you say a hedrew letter. It is not

Daleth as you say but

Dalet it looks like...

_

the best i could do with the computer
ArtemisArcherMaid chapter 4 . 6/13/2004
Oh RJ, I loved your DL trilogy, you didn't need to change it to keep it up with canon.
HeavenStone chapter 7 . 4/29/2004
You are royally freaking me out about now. Wow! This is bloody amazing! I'm loving the fic and Maud is irresistible. The bond between Severus and the girl appears very suddenly and yet very realistically (well, as realistically as it can considering Maud was seeing through an owl's eyes previously). This story has catapulted its way onto my favorites list. Great work! I'm off to read Part I.
MegMeg the one and only chapter 6 . 10/5/2003
I love George almost as much as I love Snape. Maybe more. I don't know really.. Must ponder this..
MegMeg the one and only chapter 7 . 10/5/2003
I still love this story. You're one of the most talented writers I've ever had the pleasure to read. *wishes she were Maud..* Snape's so sexy... *ahem* Anywaayy.. You've done a really good job of implementing the changes to make this agree with Order of the Pheonix. Throwing Umbridge in there. Yep. But I think this story would have been just fine AU. Why oh why canonize it? I really hated the fifth book. Don't really know why. Whatever.

I love your characterization, I love your plot. You need to keep writing.
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