|Reviews for Vignette|
| xXNejiluverXx chapter 12 . 7/10/2007
i loved it!
you really scared me there for a moment when i thought you had killed off relena. i would've hated you for it.
very original ending.. would've never thought of it.
hmm... haven't found many good GW fictions...
perhaps a sequel is in order (did that even make sense?)?
hopefully you will continue it.
ps. nice job on potraying Heero. i hate it when people make him OCC (or is it OOC?). it makes him soo out-of-character.
bahh, just me and my ramblings.
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 12 . 3/26/2007
*Screams with joy* THAT WAS FANTASTIC! I DEMAND MORE! PLEASE! OMG You have NO IDEA... well okay maybe you do have an idea... of how much I LOVE this story! Sorry for using so much CAPITALIZATION but it's just my way of expressing how much I ADORE your story :) I LOVE then ending :D (Maybe I should stop with the caps now? _;; )Please please please write a sequel! If you need help thinking of what and how to I'd love to help you out! Just look in my profile for contacts and I can give you ideas :D well, I don't want to take up your time, keep up the awesome job!
| bforbrigitta chapter 12 . 12/25/2005
yay! that was so awesome!
| Mini Nicka chapter 12 . 10/6/2005
That was amazing. Best set on one shots I have read in a while. Too bad no lemon but I loved it the way it was anyway and the last sceraio was brilliant!
| heaven'sgirl chapter 12 . 6/25/2005
this was funny and really great!
| Daniele-Marx chapter 12 . 5/27/2004
That ending was NOT funny! Schadefreude! Heero should've been furious, loss isn't funny! Although he recovered rather well, I guess...Don't know how that happened. I was hoping she would at least pull through. Oh no, the shock of her dying and him crying makes me sad! I'm going to see if all of your GW stories are this deceiving now. I never even thought to just write small exerpts instead of full-length pieces. Good job on the idea!
| jisAtsU siLENcE chapter 12 . 1/13/2004
this was awesome great ... WOW! lolz ... i liked that last chapter the best ... wahahaha ... great idea
| Cori chapter 11 . 12/23/2003
*MWAH* I'm inlove with this story( or stories), you rock
| Friend of InuYashaKagome chapter 12 . 12/14/2003
Okay I've read all of the chapters in this story and I love them! But the very last one tops them all. Well maybe not the one when Dorthy helped her but pretty close. Excellant. I have nothing but good things to say.
| Sakura123 chapter 12 . 12/9/2003
Okay, this was by far an interesting story but it was intriguing to be frank. Good on Duo Maxwell.
A): The writing style was like a poetry (which didn't bother me. It was quiet well. Please note that this isn't a flame)
B): You made Relena slightly OCC.
C): You made Heero sound like a stalker and a hormonal driven person. That's OCC.
D): The Romance in here was too sexual like sterotype-ish.
E): Duo was very well characterized in this story.
And that's about it. Don't take it the wrong way man. I really don't need a flamer. I get too much of those.
| Dj scythe chapter 12 . 12/6/2003
oh my god that was genius! i love you! er i mean this story! just the story. you know? gosh!
| Hermonthis chapter 12 . 12/1/2003
LMAO! Duo's an absolute genius for coming up with a plan like that. Wonderful ending, it had me crying tears of laughter at the end, especially the 'shower' proposition. (I have something similar to that in my own fics.)
Best line? When he started to rant in "I had it all planned out... I was going to marry you... find someplace to live, have a DOZEN CHILDREN..."
My goodness, 12 kids! LoL. _*
| Lei Xang chapter 12 . 11/29/2003
Well, THAT was certainly interesting! Who woulda thunk it? Heh, leave it to Duo... I love it near the end, and before that, but Gah! I don't even know what I'm saying anymore . Loved this fic!
| Cat chapter 12 . 11/28/2003
This is a great series. I absolutely loved those last 3 parts. I really hope you continue with this. :)
| Silver Running Water chapter 12 . 11/27/2003
Ahaha... that was absolutely MARVELOUS! You are a fantastic writer. I loved the way this was written. None of it was rushed, and you did a great job of having everyone stay in character the whole time. The story flowed and I just loved it! *grins* Great job!