Reviews for Blue Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *banging head against wall* you must update! I insist! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute, cant wait for future chapters. _Ja ne! |
![]() ![]() What I wanna share is why you just dont save the thing the moment you write it good by the way sorry its only a good but it has to be longer than that if you want a great anywho update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I'm so loving this story... ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha... cute! Loved it! Nice start! _~ |
![]() ![]() i think this story is awesome,plz make some more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() That was really great! Pleez update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! She updates at last! *bows* thank you SO much! Now, please, my friend, make it longer. I liked that bit with Mokie-kun. He's SO right! *huggles Mokie* Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please! it's a really good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue PUH- LEASE! (puppy dog eyes) |
![]() ![]() ![]() short, but good. Wow, that was a sudden change for Kaiba though ; |
![]() ![]() I just finished reading all oy your chapters and I must say they are really said you were looking for some new ideas,well I have one or two. For starters Tea should move in with Kaiba, second they should grow really close (death of parents,Moukaba,awkward moments,annuall balls hosted by Kaiba etc..) but when certain friends and coworkers try to interfere with the budding romance Kaiba realizes his love for her. someone who hates Kaiba kidnapps her, a high ranking person in Kaibas corp commits the foul deed wanting to rule the corp.. well a duel is in order as well as a a hand to hand fight. Tea is reacued both admit their love to each orther, and their friends are happy for them . Well as I said these are my Ideas so If you want to write something else well I say go for it . To sum things up good luck with this fanfiction,school,and life. yours truly, Lisa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You updated! Go Seto! Make her feel better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cries* that was sad, anyways, update soon. . . . -BLuAca- a.K.a.-BLu |