|Reviews for Looking For Salvation|
| Little Tanuki chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
Cool. Glad I found this one. It's quite interesting so far.
(Especially I liked your prologue - quite a good "hook" there.)
One thing I would suggest is that you do have a slight tendency to overuse characters' names. (Which can interrupt the flow of the story somewhat in places.)
Good stuff. Please keep going.
| Asphodel Lives chapter 5 . 9/14/2006
Carry on please! I know it's been like forever, but we need more BP fics, there's none being updated!
| Gabsgrl chapter 4 . 11/6/2003
Great job so far, please keep it up!
| Spencer chapter 3 . 10/20/2003
Where the hell did Harry come from?
| CaptainKJ chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
cliffhanger! wow...you got everything right, and that's good. Maybe you should devote a chapter to how Ronnie's feeling.
| Nancy chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
I thinkit is reaklly good the plot and charachters are good too. You just need to add more detail. Ya know? Ya need to make the readers feel and see and smell the scenery
| Julia chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
you gotta write soon cos thats a great start
| Pru chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
So far the prologue shows there is going to be an interesting story ahaed. I hope there won't be much of a wait for the next chapter.
| Nancy chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
That is a good begiging and you have to finish it! ttyl
| robyn chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
you got my attension, cant wait to read more, excellent start!
| liz chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
really good so far! continue!
| Danae chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
| Anna chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Please continue... soon... I gotta know what happens! We need more Ronnie fics in the fanfic world!
Ronnie is my fav character... even though I hated Jeri Ryan in Star Trek Voyager...
| Joy2003 chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Your story sounds interesting I hope you update soon :)
| Gabsgrl chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
Great start! Can't wait to read more!