|Reviews for TWELVE BUT FOR ODIUS MIRTH BY MIRIAM I AM MIRIAM|
| modernxxmyth chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
I just wanted to let you know that this is some really incredible writing. Go ahead and quit your day job because I can see that becoming a novelist is in your future! Impeccable grammar, and everything was very in character. It was like watching an episode of the show! Outstanding work, once again, my friend. Live long and prosper.
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
| angelofmystery chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Humm...I don't know what to say, I don't want to be rude...first, its VAUGHN *not* VON...and what is w/ the dialogue? It's odd! By any chance was this the result of translating (using etc) from another language? Cause that's what it sounds like to me...keep trying though. Read the other fics on here, all of them are great- I love sydney/sark...