So I know that this story hasn't been updated in 15 years, but I just wanted to let you know that I love it. The writing and characterization are excellent, the plot is interesting, and it plays out like an actual (albeit darker) episode or comic issue. It was a great read. Thanks for sharing it with us!

A recording from Zim to describe the futility and helplessness of the listener, I can particularly hear the Jigsaw theme playing in the background now. The scene just reminds me of those epic Saw twist endings :P

This story is an amazing read, crazy violence and relentless obsessions, not to mention the despair by the characters captured really well. I do hope you return to this fandom someday, this is an excellent story!

Pffft all I do nowadays is read lurker's awsome fan fictions uh did I just admit that I don't have a social life huh geuss I did okay getting to the real review I love this chapter ! I can just tell yours and her's great writing talents intertwined in this chapter it's great :)ps . I blame you and her for my lack. Of a social life:) pps I especially blame you lurker curse you!

No thank you I don't really need a foot rub but you can give my mother one she has althritis which is why she forces and sometimes bribes me to rub her feet even though my favorite shows are on so I'd really like it if someone else did it fir a change anyways keep up the good fan fic :)

I loved the ending! And, again, your writing is nearly flawless!

I forget, what was the status on this story? Surely it is not over?

This chapter almost had an air of nostalgia.

Short, but quick and to the point.

While it's not entirely out of character, it's ever so slightly protruding from IC. Membrane, I mean. Doctor Membrane seems ever so slightly OOC in this story. Still, you have a good grip on the basic characteristics, even most of the finely detailed ones.

Again, I am head over heels in love with this story. The action scenes are amazingly fluid, incredibly vivid, and very entertaining.

I enjoy your writing style. It paints a very descriptive image.

Oh my. You are gifted with the art of awesome action writing. I was so enrapted, I didn't notice the cat clawing at my leg.

I enjoy this very much so!

Onwards!

okay.

it's now 1:16am on my computer here in Australia.

nobody is online on my IM, and I just finished reading the chapter.

This was stupid of me, because in seven hours I have to be awake and I am very tired. Thusly, I find it difficult to write a long and praise-filled review, and do not have the mindpower at my disposal to think up ten fabulous reasons you should continue, other than it was really good and please tell me I haven't stayed up all night for nothing. But a guilt trip is a useless reason and it makes authors feel bad- especially now that it's almost three years on from the last update date and its difficult to get started on something that's been left for that long (plus you've got Souvenirs on the go)

So instead of nagging and being annoying and whatnot, I'll just chuck this on alerts and wait if/until you do update. In the meantime, G'night!

This is so excellent! Why didn't you continue? I've long been a fan of your drabbles, but I didn't know you were also so good at full-length fics. Those I can't do. You have a great sense of drama and pacing, and supplimented by your lucid narating voice and diolouge, it makes for some kickass fanfiction.

I love the idea that Gaz has purple eyelashes. Fantastic image. I never even thought of it that way.

How does Gaz have a car? If Dib is 15, that makes her 13, so she can't drive.