Wow! Great story!

Can't wait to read more!

I'm alerting this, just in case you update it in the future. i would love an update tho! but i can understand if you don't. :)

Yay that was fun I wanna read more please so update soon and I'll give you a TACO!

You. Are. MEAN! Two fics and two horrible cliffhangers. Dear god, the drama and suspense in this one. Wow. I could barely breath in this last one. Wow. I thought for a while that it was a prequel to your Souvenirs fic, but seeing as its not done, I guess not. Great ficcie. Really great.

*sobs in corner due to cliffhanger*

is this it? i hope not, it's a really great story.

seriously, if you don't continue, then i wasted an hour of my life reading it. not that it was a bother though.

anywho, great start-middle-endish thing you got going on. keep up the great work :)

Hi. this story seriously needs to be continued. Im going even more insane from waiting for a new chapter! Please work on this again! This was the first fic I read, and its still my all time fave!

I like your fic, continue please.

post more soon!

VERY good so far. Your writing skills are amazing. Great, exciting story... I can't wait for the next chapter. )

Invader Zim fan fiction, where the morbid undertones of the show turn into an orgy of violence in the minds of its sadistic fans! That aspect of the show is one of the things that made is so awesome, and this story runs with it..I love it. It would be better if the story wasn't open-ended, more dramatic and depressing that way (do/did you plan on adding to it?), but 99% of it is just fine. Haha..I didn't really know what to expect from the summary and the first chapter or so..maybe Zim coming up with some horrible plot involving robot weasels or something..but I like the direction it took. Definitely one of my favorites.

Awesome chapter. Very exciting! Did Dib actually blow Gaz up, or did I read that wrong? Anyway, Dib didn’t do half bad for himself. I’m assuming he’s going after Zim, but he should take a day off to recouperate.

I like the style of this chapter; all the sentence fragments work to make the tone seem fast and breathless.

Best line: “It was imperative to have a sensitive safety mechanism installed to protect the house, the neighborhood, the city, and the surrounding countryside, because when Membrane’s experiments went wrong they did so impressively. ”

Aw, shit. I REALLY wanted to see Zim dead. Shit. Shit shit fuck damn ass shit. It ain't fair.

Wait a minute... Gaz enjoying Dib's discomfort in the last chapter was Zim re-activating that nano machine, wasn't it? Or was it? Because if it was, that would make at least SOME sense. It was just so close to her usual behavior that it's hard to tell.

Very tense and vivid description of the confrontation in the Membrane house. That Gaz has just busted Dib out (even though it DID have nothing to do with him and everything in the universe to do with her precious revenge) and that he knows she is being controlled by Zim makes it less irritating that he is taking such pains not to harm her. Time after time after time Dib is all concern over Gaz not getting hurt... even as Gaz is doing her very level best damnedest to hurt HIM! I give you bonus points for having Dib be the one to push Gaz down the stairs this time.

You most convincingly describe the physical effects of Dib's forced inactivity and the argument between him and his body!

I don't want to give away what happened to anybody who reads the reviews first, but... on first reading I didn't really see it coming and yet you were fair; you did plant the clue!

Um... did you say this was going to be zad*F*?

Greetings Senri, Oh…good Excuse! Gaz takes control, if only for a little while. I liked the rescue scene. With Dib out, Earth may still have a chance, however slim. I hope Gaz will suffer little punishment for her defiance. This is a great tale. - Ashsema

Greetings Senri, T’was a good instalment. Zim seems to have underestimated Gaz. Not good for Zim. While Membrane may possibly be easier to control, despite his advanced intelligence, Gaz will provide a formidable challenge. I like Ms. Tinny’s complaint to her cat. Nice touch! I can’t wait to see what Zim has planned. - Ashsema