Reviews for Pact
Ashsema chapter 9 . 6/10/2005
Greetings Senri, Wicked! What a great name for such an ugly chapter. I feel for poor Membrane and Gaz. Only Gaz could have some inkling of what has happened, but it doesn’t seem likely. Zim’s little toy of destruction is most evil and effective of all his schemes. I hope they fail, but it sound pretty serious. He could use this as a great blackmail tool against Dib. His intentions seem to be towards keeping Dib alive, suffering, miserable, tortured, but alive none the less. A wonderful instalment! - Ashsema
DeadDeadDeadUnused chapter 10 . 6/1/2005
Wow. Just... wow. This story is beautifully written, intracitaly detailed, perfect to the last puncuation mark. There's just one thing that I noticed. Now, I'm not nit-picking, or flaming, this is just an observation. I noticed that this fic doesn't have any of the humor that the show usually has. Not trying to be mean or anything, like I said, just wanted to point that out, okay? I'm adding you to all of my lists. All of them.
HMeko chapter 10 . 5/3/2005
Wow. Okay... No, 'Wow' pretty much sums it up.

And I might add, that I literally had to _force_ myself to read through all of Chapter 7, and it was quite literally painful the whole way. I mean, several times I switched to a different browser window just to give myself a chance to start breathing again.

Which is the way such a scene should be when it's well-written, and I applaud you for it.

I eagerly await the next chapter - this is a well-crafted story and it's most definately got its hooks in me.

neosun7 chapter 10 . 5/3/2005
Wow that was awesome! Go Dib! Great chappy! Until the next one... Bye!
chickens chapter 10 . 5/2/2005
I hope you haven't given up on this syory. I really would like to see how this ends
Dibsthe1 chapter 10 . 4/9/2005
Wow... WHAT a sucker punch to the gut! Dib's never felt more rejected, abandoned, and betrayed.

Out of character. That's one way of putting it. Gaz suddenly acting all warm, supportive and nicey-nicey would indeed put the fear of God into anyone who up until now has been allowed to see only her other self.

If Membrane is this convinced that Dib is insane, self mutilating etc, then how would he explain the explosion in the emergency room?

You still haven't told us what that... that... mini-machine is...
Maran Zelde chapter 10 . 4/7/2005
I'm laughing at myself right now, because for a moment I got this mixed up with "Souvenirs," so when I read the first few lines I was thinking, What the heck? How did Gaz get on the Massive?

Man, my sleep deprivation is *definitely* taking its toll. I've *got* to get to bed at a decent time tonight!

*Clears throat* Anyway...

So it seems like Zim is controlling Gaz and Membrane. Will Dib find out what Zim did to them? His gut is telling him that Gaz isn't herself...I hope he listens to it.
neosun7 chapter 9 . 3/29/2005
Wow. That's just... whoa. Somewhat disturbing; great chapter! Please continue soon!
Sphinx the Cat chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Wow, words cannot describe such stunning writing...this is excellence at its greatest in my opinion. Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible ok? 3 *vanishes in a puff of black smoke*
flying metal child chapter 9 . 3/17/2005
Wow, great fight. Zim's a total bastard.
Silver Sands chapter 9 . 3/16/2005
Aiie! I love you, Senri! This chapter was amazing. The visual discription was very good. You've got a way of making everything seem so real and vivid. A reader can really see and feel EVERYTHING. The tension between characters was amazing too. Gaz and her dad, Gaz and Zim, and Zim being coldly fascinated by it all. What will happen to poor Dib? Wow.
Dibsthe1 chapter 9 . 3/16/2005
I don't think I'm the only one who's been wondering if you were ever going to update! And that was one heck of a place to leave us dangling! But that's okay, the main thing is that you did update! _

?... ?... ?... ? Um... is this the same Gaz? The Gaz who was fully capable of "dooming" him if he rubbed her the wrong way by daring to scream too loud from the pain while tugging the ragged ends of his T-shirt out of the clotting gouge in his shoulder? The one who callously sneered at his pain when he mentioned cracked ribs? As Zim wondered, why does Gaz even care INDEED?

What IS that thing? At first I thought it was some kind of tracking device, but it obviously does a whole lot more than that. It's safe as long as it stays IN the body apparently... and why must it be near their brains? AAGGHA! I MUST KNOW!

Did Gaz run and get the teacher back in Chapter, what was it, FOUR? If it took me literally until today to figure that one out, well it's no wonder Dib himself was so sarcastic with his thanks. Looking out for somebody can't get much more subtle than that.
InvaderZae chapter 9 . 3/16/2005
WO! GO ZIM! great job, storys great so far.
Maran Zelde chapter 9 . 3/16/2005
Ew! I'm a bit sensitive, but I think you might want to change the rating to R, just because of the gory fight between Zim and Gaz. You should've seen the look on my face when I read that.

Once again, you've actually made me feel sympathy for Gaz. Here she is, finally standing up for her brother and getting pulverized by Zim. It doesn't look good for the entire family. What will become of them? You've got me on the edge of my seat here.
D'len chapter 8 . 1/26/2005
Please, please don't stop with this story! This is one of the best, and the most plausible plan for getting rid of Dib, I've found yet.

Please go on - this is so very well written and a pleasure to read, it was a shock when I got to the end of the page and found there was no more.

Thank you so much and I'll be watching for updates with bated breath

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