Whoa,this entire chapter was so vivid. It made me all squirmy and gave me a vague squishy feeling by the end. Interesting story indeed. Update soon!

Wow. This was a good look into how Dib took the arm probe. You can really feel Zim's malice and evil in this fic, and it's refreshing.

Juicy! Deliciously juicy...

Of course, I've already TOLD you all this, but I'll tell you again! Great opening paragraph, great voice throughout- and THANK YOU for not making Dib's cutting in any way a pleasant or desirable thing to do.

And I'm so proud you adhered to THE LAW OF THE BATHROOM! XD This is such an awesome fic, and I'm always so happy to see your talent in action. Naturally, gimme more right now! XD

As usual, you know what I think of your writing. That's the way, uh-huh, uh-huh, I like it, uh-huh uh-huh.

... pardon that little outburst. Anyway: Poor little Dibbers. Always one step behind, or one step ahead but he doesn't know what to do so he ends one step behind again. No familial support, and now he's got a foreign object jabbed in him. Poor little darling.

And other than that, I really haven't much to say. Sowwey. Har.

wow...so...the whole time you were discribing the probe thing in dib, my elebow was having sympathy pains. please update soon?

Wow, that was very intense! I enjoyed it immensely (sp?). Please hurry with the next chapter. ::Adds to favorites::

Zims gonna win right! I hope Job

Hmm... I wonder why I didn't start reading this sooner... oh well! I like what you've got so far. The way you write makes it easy and enjoyable to read through, I've read everything in one sitting. Do hope you update (relativly) soon that also goes for your other fic. Do it _O

Greetings Senri, Amazing dream sequence. I really enjoyed it. Does it have some type of hidden meaning? If so, what was it, I wonder? I knew it wouldn’t take Dib long to figure out that Zim had his laptop. Can’t wait to see how he gets it back. - Ashsema

This is what happens when I stop reading a story at chapter 2. This is GOOD! I have no idea where it's going but I like where's it been so far. The fight between Dib and Zim in the school was original and realistic. I liked the dream, how it hints of things to come, of Dib's own internal desires. I wonder what Zim will discover on the laptop? Nice touch with him stealing it. Usually it's the other way around with Dib stealing something of Zim's. Well, if the title is anything to suggest by, I don't think the enemies will be at odds for much longer.

SO Good...a genious piece of work; You get Blue's Seal of Approval! And unlike those other, highly disappointing seals, MINE is actually a seal! *arf!* It likes you!

I absolutely love your "wild imagery!" and the dream sequence reminds me of something that we all have to go through and that is recalling the past. Dib's definitely older and he remembers when he was a child and somehow that felt so free and innocent, but now, as he looks back, I guess it's a little sad to see that Zim hasn't changed at all. I wonder if this was really a dream or a true premonition...

the descriptions that you do are good when you do them, I think you should actually do a bit more on that front. You also include some very good phrasing, especially when talking about the activities of dib and zim from zim yelling at the sloven grr to dib screaming. Totemo ii desu.

This is GREAT! This is one of the best Dib vs. Zim fanfictions I've read in a long time. I hope you write more like it!

Greetings Senri, Wonderful chapter as usual! Poor Dib, life just never seems to cut him meny breaks. At least he was able to get a few things back. If you don’t get a chance to update and/or I don’t get a chance to review before then, have a great time at art camp. I look forward to the continuation of this tale. - Ashsema