I think it is very good! You have the characters well-balanced with their personalities, so they are not out of character. Zim does seem a bit more serious than usual, but the plot evens it out. I will look forward to the next chapter!

*prods*
You GENIUS, you! I LOVE this. It is way better than anything I'd write.
You have been added to my favorite author list, and this story has been added to my favorite stories list. Wether you like it or not. So, HA.
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Please, continue, update frequently, and GOOD LUCK. _

I really liked it! It very nicely written and doesn't sound too redundant. I would love to see the rest!

Greetings Senri, Sorry for such a delayed review. I was absent for a while. Enough excuses, on to the review; So, the games begin. I love how you’ve portrayed the characters. I cannot help but feel sorry for Dib. It would seem he is in for the time of his life. And not a good time either. Well, he has had plenty of practice, for Earth’s sake; let’s just hope he can deliver. I cannot wait to see what Zim has planned. - This promises to be a great tale. -Ashsema

O, this is very intriguing! _ Good handling of the characters; I could easily visualize everything as it happened. (Funny stuff with GIR ... tuna fish and chocolate chip cookies ... *laughs*.) I'm very curious to see how things develop ... I'm guessing Zim is going to find out that warfare isn't the grand adventure that he's expecting. Good point about Gaz's metabolism too; I never thought about that ... *laughs at the idea of 300-lb Gaz*

I'm speechless to the greatness of this story. I hope you write more soon!
-Neosun7

Dude, cool fic. I love all the descriptive words you choose. I can picture everything that is happening and it's all believable. Good job and kudos to you. Please finish.
-Janice C. Vasquez

Now THIS I like. Your writing is excellent. Everything was really well-described and easy to imagine, and everyone seems in character. Please continue, I've missed stories like these which are just juicy with prose! The storyline also sounds promising, I look forward to seeing where it will go.

~SKI

Nice build up you have going there - and your observations of thought are keen. Not to mention how well-written this is. Definitely it's one I'm going to keep an eye on.

Facinantingly enough this is one of the few zim fics that I've read that actually gets into the psychology behind the main characters. Senri did an excelent job in describing Gaz and the other characters too. I hope she will write more.

... is tthis going to be ZADR? (hopeful)

I liked that chapter, even though not much happened. The confrontation was really cool. You have a good point about Gaz being thin in future fics. True, she might end up like my mom, who remains extremely thin after 4 pregnancies. But the chances of that happening are very slim. In fact, I may make Gaz fat in one of my fics. Would you mind? :P

*grins real big* Things are definitely gonna get interesting now. I always love seeing Zim get COMPETENT. Now let's see if Dib can rise up to the occasion. The chapter is tense, like the heavy feeling in the air before a storm breaks. Your physical descriptions and characterization are rock-solid.

Must have more...! D

Greetings Senri, Curiosity abounds. What war? Why Earth? How will Zim fulfill his end of the bargain? How will questions get answered? I really like your prologue, leaves us wanting for more. Anxiously awaiting your next installment. - Ashsema

Whoa. Great story, dude. It's not cliche at all, the beginning is actually pretty original. I like your summary for the story too. Can't wait to see where this goes.