|Reviews for Dancing in the Dark|
| MariShal chapter 14 . 8/4/2009
Interesting mission, great Harm/Mac interaction, and the best fake relationship ever with Mac & Gunny! Cente was too funny, and jealous Harm was too cute. Great trio :)
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 14 . 1/12/2004
Honestly I have to say that this is one of the few good H/M fics I've ever found. It was a good take on what should have happened with this season and the you did a good job of keeping the characters more or less in character. I really liked this fic.
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 12 . 1/12/2004
"I noticed with disgust that I was covered with mud from head to toe, but on the bright side it helped me blend into the shrubbery, and it was probably pulling toxins from my pores as an added bonus"
This line was hilarious, probably one of my favorites. But yikes, Mac has a gun to her head and Frankie's saying to kill her. Must go read next chapter.
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 11 . 1/12/2004
Well, there was a catfight, but not the one I was expecting! Excellent cliff hangar. I can't wait to see what's going on in the next chapter.
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 10 . 1/12/2004
Embarrasing situation #308! That was a great save on Mac's part. I'm starting to get curious about what's going on with the lawyer and all. It'll be interesting to find out what the real deal is with Gloria and Frankie.
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 8 . 1/12/2004
OOpsie, that should be interesting! I love how you mix humor, with drama and angst in this story. I can go from laughing to serious in the space of one paragraph. This fic is great!
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 4 . 1/12/2004
Hehe, now this should be interesting!
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 2 . 1/12/2004
Oh, Interesting cliff hangar. I wonder if all is what it seems and what Mac will have to say about that.
| Jaina Solo2 chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
I like this story already. The way you tell it from Mac's point of view is excellent. It's nice to get to see her emotions.
| e-dog chapter 14 . 11/12/2003
This was an awesome story! I throughly enjoyed every chapter!
| Kassia525 chapter 14 . 11/11/2003
Great ending to a great story! Now if only it was like this on TV...
| sunchaser2 chapter 14 . 11/11/2003
great story! i really liked how it ended. will there be a sequal?
| Ruli chapter 14 . 11/11/2003
Yay! Great ending! You are very creative, that Frankie was a real psycho and you wrote her so well! Excellent job! keep up the great work!
| ArwenUndomiel chapter 14 . 11/11/2003
I've gotta admit - I'm actually a little disapointed to see that you finished this story! I enjoyed to so much and it was written and constructed fantastic! I love it.
Any chance of a sequel? ;) lol. I'd read it. That's a hint BTW.
Good luck with your other JAG ventures. I'll be reading them too.
Once again thanks for such a great story. I became very much addicted and am going to have to find something to fill the void. Bye.
| emokid chapter 14 . 11/10/2003
Hey, No! It's over! As weird as it sounds, I'm going to MISS this fic! I'd ALWAYS look forward to a new chapter, and now there will be no more! It was an amazing, incredible, wonderful fic. IT was exciting and well written, with a good case and AWESOME Harm and Mac action!
You had perfect characterization, they had so many great lines that were perfect dialog for them.
I REALLY hope you're going to write another fic soon! I read your "Love and..." seris, as well as "Nothing stays the same" and loved them both too.
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story