|Reviews for Dancing in the Dark|
| Rynesmom chapter 14 . 11/10/2003
Manette, I couldn't stop reading this! It was incredible! You had me hanging at each chapter. As I read, I could "see" the entire story in my head, you did a wonderful job with the descriptions, everything. I've read many of your fics and they are all excellent!
| kibbix chapter 14 . 11/10/2003
Good ending...lol...I liked it!
| LynnM chapter 14 . 11/10/2003
This was an amazing story. You wrote everything so well...the dialogue, the descriptions, the relationships and the emotions. Your characterizations of Harm and Mac were fabulous. Thanks for writing.
| LizD chapter 14 . 11/10/2003
That was very sweet. Thanks for a great read,
| cool cat2 chapter 14 . 11/10/2003
Loved the end and hope their's a sequel in the works:)
| emokid chapter 13 . 11/8/2003
I can't get over how amazing this fic is. Man, you're an incredibly talented writer... you just phrase everything so perfectly, I love it.
This is by far one of the greatest fics I've ever come across.
| ArwenUndomiel chapter 13 . 11/8/2003
Talk about edge of your seat action! Great chappie! Frankie's a dead loony and once again tension between Harm and Mac. Can't wait for the next chappie so please post soon. :)
| LizD chapter 13 . 11/8/2003
Well that was a different turn of events. Hm don't quite know what to say about any of that. Will look forward to the next chapter.
| mkiwi chapter 13 . 11/8/2003
its awesome... continue.
| Ruli chapter 12 . 11/8/2003
...I...am...speechless. I have no idea what to say but I know that I want you to update this story as soon as possible! Frankie is evil? Gloria is? I know those guys are, but what's going to happen to Mac? You cannot let her die, or I will...well...there's not much I can do, but it won't be pretty! Just Update!
| ArwenUndomiel chapter 12 . 11/7/2003
DAMN...a cliffy! Please update soon! Great work BTW am loving this story more and more each time I read.
| ArwenUndomiel chapter 11 . 11/7/2003
Wow. I stay off line for one day and you update two new chapters!
Great chapter, very unexpected twist at the end. Wonder what's going to happen. Better read on then.
| kibbix chapter 12 . 11/6/2003
PLEASE CONTINUE...this is great...i'm on the edge of my seat...
| ducktapedmoose chapter 12 . 11/6/2003
Oh God, I love this! It's frickin' awesome! Keep up the good work!
| navychick chapter 12 . 11/6/2003
wow! keep going!