Reviews for Brighter Still
laughsatluna chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
I liked this story a lot...it was well written, and the emotions were handled well too. I was all set to hate it if you'd had Aoki and Karen just jump into bed, but what you showed here was quite believable. Well done!
mawee-no-baka chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
YAY! Another Aoki/Karen fan! *tackleglomps* n_n I absolutely love this... Its a favorite story for sure 3 Beautifully written! My favorite part has GOT to be the ending though! XD XD XD Not that I wanted it to end, of course! But it just ended so perfectly 3 Great jon! I hope to see more from you n_n

Ja!
funky-squirrel chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Damn, that was well-written! It was nice and kinda bittersweet. I liked it.
Misura chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Lovely! Utterly adorable! Especially the way Karen's voice was already in his head, before they met and just in general the way you had your words shape the scenery. A beautiful read. _