Reviews for LifeDeathAnd In Between
actressen chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
Good. Easy to read. Only problem is a few grammatical errors here and there.
RarrBaby chapter 6 . 8/1/2006
Bad:Marco is gay and I honestly don't think him and Ellie would get married.

Good:Ellie didn't die! Shes my fav! ]

Bad:It was REALLY rushed. I think I finished it in 5 minutes

BUT im not being a jerk like people do to my stories. They review with the meanest things. Well I have to say even thought it was short it was good. Keep it up ]
Guest chapter 3 . 5/15/2006
I don't like it because Ash is not the type of girl who would get pregnant by accident or who would sleep around.
Alexia chapter 6 . 1/31/2004
I though it was a little rushed and could add more details..
ALDKgj chapter 6 . 12/12/2003
it sucked!
Hermione425 chapter 6 . 11/1/2003
That was like...the cutest thing ever! It was all intense but it ended happily ever after!

FromWhomItMayConcern chapter 6 . 10/31/2003
Well, umm. The concept was good, but it was really rushed, and unbelievable.

Work on developing your stories, and do research.

Keep writing.
Eheh chapter 6 . 10/31/2003
I've got to say...a homosexual man would most definitely NOT propose to a female, even were he to love her. He would never love her physically, and, as shallow as it sounds, that counts for a lot in a relationship. I think he would feel more uncomfortable and sympathetic than passionate.
xbrokenfairyx chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
youch...Breast cancer! i didnt even know she had breasts! they make her look so flat in the show. good job tho, amd read my fanfic 2!~*~*
justme chapter 3 . 10/17/2003
wow. that is intense. update soon.
justme chapter 3 . 10/17/2003
wow. that is intense update soon.
vintage clothes chapter 1 . 10/8/2003