Reviews for The Origin
TheChosenOne3 chapter 3 . 10/9/2003
That is so Marguerite! I love that about her and you captured it so well! Great job! At least you are getting this story out quickly. *hint,hint* ;) I can't wait, and I promise I won't say anything about the other story...for now
keys3303 chapter 3 . 10/9/2003
Another great chapter! It's just like Marguerite to take charge and let it be known that she will be asking the questions. I can't wait to see how this story is going to contuine. Please update soon cuz i can't wait

Keys
MissMeggs chapter 2 . 10/9/2003
Oh!

That was a twist I never expected! Marguerite, royalty? Cool! I'm enjoying this, please do continue it soon!
TheChosenOne3 chapter 2 . 10/9/2003
Marguerite...a princess...who would have guessed? You are an excellent writer, and I am glad that you are updating this one so quickly. I can't wait for more!
Lylirium chapter 2 . 10/9/2003
Now that was something!

Marguerite is pregnant? Not bad...

Please continue this...I would like to know what happens next.

Spirita
kat183 chapter 2 . 10/9/2003
Now I'm really hooked. So far both chapters are well written. Hopefully chapter 3 will be here soon and we find out more. A married Marguerite and Roxton, and she's pregnant to boot, I just love it. Chapter 3 soon please.o
kat183 chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Intriguing start. I was glad when I read the age, I thought it was going to be one of Roxtons floozies arriving to rock the happy ship. At least Finn has her head screwed on the right way, the others are far to trusting. Looking forward to chapter 2.
zeusfluff chapter 2 . 10/8/2003
What a great chapter two! Hope to see chapter three up and running soon!

~Zeus Fluff~
zeusfluff chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Hey, great start! Hope to read more soon!

~Zeus Fluff~
A. Windsor chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Finn's right. They should listen to her!

lookin' good! More soon!
MissMeggs chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
you've cought my interest!

Please continue, i'm curious to see what happens!
keys3303 chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
hey great start. can't wait for more
TheChosenOne3 chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
About time someone said something about it! That is one good thing a bout Finn she doesn't lack as much common sense as the rest of them, well Marguerite is the same way, but if they say way off the plateau, she jumps on the charity train! I can't wait to see what havoc this new stranger brings!
barbiedahl3 chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
I think you have a great intro to this interesting story...the guest who is always trouble...
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