|Reviews for Second Class Soldier|
| closet geek chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
*sniffle* this story leaks angst
really good tho! no need for revision (pfft screw extra detail)
| Kage-chan chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
great story so far! i like it!
| Dark Angel66 chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Lacking detail? You think your lacking detail? This story is great, and its perfect how it is! Akane is so cool! Your a great writer, nice job! Continue!
| Tara chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
You killer her! And you killed him! And... and...
It's brilliant, though.