Reviews for For a Moment
Lakitalover chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
This sort of makes me want to laugh, because if you changed a few words and names, I would totally think this was a fic about Buffy leaving Spike.
Tanya chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
My heart just broke...
strayphoenix chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Such perfect Lancitty, it's beyond words

prydep chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
A new fan fiction archive just for Lance/Kitty has been created.

You're invited to register and upload your fiction at

Let's get all the fans united!
twicetherouge chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
yeah decent and beilevable.
X-Freak chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
locoaqui chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
that was very good
Princess SimbiAni Dreamz a'Luv chapter 1 . 10/10/2003

Sincerely, SimbiAni... luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!
me chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Lol, how long has it been since *you've* posted an Xmen Evo fic? Huh? *Huh?*

Yes! That's right! A long time!

But! It's good to see you back, and hopefully with more to come? (No, that's not a pun! You filthy author, you).

Any story by you is a work of art, and this would be no exception (ignore *any* reviewer who says otherwise!). A new and different light to the Lance/Kitty/Piotr equation. Very well done, it's just a shame it wasn't longer. But I suppose it's one of them vingettes? Or whatever you call them. Maybe *gasp* multiple chapters? That would be awesome. But if you cant/wont/that's a stupid idea, then I guess it *is* up to you and I trust your circumstance/rights/ideas. Uh huh.

Anyways. Good job! I'm gonna go read it again! Even though it was kinda short...
Lyranfan chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Nicely done story - short and to the point. A little mature for the general crowd but I think a really well done progression from Kitty's initial attraction to Lance and then her transition to Piotr
Steven P. P chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
The emotional part was well written, what bothers me though is that I find the way you portrayed the Lance/Kitty relationship a bit strange. No, wait, I mean quite a bit strange... It does not really make sense for me.
DreamingOfRain chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
Really really really good! I feel so bad for Lance.