|Reviews for Tears of Happiness|
| i'm a newfie's-girl chapter 22 . 7/23/2005
SEQUAL! THAT'S WHAT YOU NEED PLEASE SEQUAL!
| oohwhatnow chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
hey this is really good! But some critique (trust me it may sound harsh, but it's made some of my stories so much better) Keep it all in one tense. You're kind of jumping back and forth between 2nd and 3rd. It'll make it easier to understand who's doing what. But that's really the only thing I've noticed! Pleez come check out my story! "The Heart of a Snake" it's Holes but it's in R, but only because of language...I swear!