Reviews for Storm Clouds
Joe S chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
You need to get a good beta reader. Interesting otherwise.
Harry2 chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Not a bad story. But double check the spelling of some of your words. It would make your stories a lot better!
Marcus Rowland chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
I liked this story a lot - a long time since I've seen a good Authority / BtVS crossover (and I wrote the last one so it doesn't count), and you've captured Jenny and Shen very nicely; not so sure about Jack, he didn't seem to have enough to do.

You desperately need someone to proof-read your work; I think you're trusting a spell checker and it's not correcting words which are spelled correctly but used inappropriately. For example

Drinking pall - should be pal

Ginny pig - guinea pig

strange storeys - stories

as you're hear - here

Tar love - Ta

Angle - Angel

Robbed of their prise - prize

There are lots more.
c-wolf chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I like it.