|Reviews for Storm Clouds|
| Joe S chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
You need to get a good beta reader. Interesting otherwise.
| Harry2 chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Not a bad story. But double check the spelling of some of your words. It would make your stories a lot better!
| Marcus Rowland chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
I liked this story a lot - a long time since I've seen a good Authority / BtVS crossover (and I wrote the last one so it doesn't count), and you've captured Jenny and Shen very nicely; not so sure about Jack, he didn't seem to have enough to do.
You desperately need someone to proof-read your work; I think you're trusting a spell checker and it's not correcting words which are spelled correctly but used inappropriately. For example
Drinking pall - should be pal
Ginny pig - guinea pig
strange storeys - stories
as you're hear - here
Tar love - Ta
Angle - Angel
Robbed of their prise - prize
There are lots more.
| c-wolf chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I like it.