Reviews for Unforgivable Acts
Anne Phoenix chapter 5 . 10/24/2003
The excitement is certainly mounting - why only word of warning would be that you spend a little more time on developing your characters! They are human and tangible, but something is missing... Otherwise: yikes! Harry to Voldemort now?
SpecialParanoia chapter 4 . 10/23/2003
*pouts* That was short... Oh well. Still great. Keep it up!
Anne Phoenix chapter 4 . 10/23/2003
Angst and pain and torture and suffering. That's what suits Harry best really... Is this your first fic? Its a little uneasy (fluency interrupted) at time. Nevertheless, I'm a sucker for a good tale, and this one is damn exciting! Expecting more!
samhaincat chapter 4 . 10/22/2003
Please continue soon, as I'm on the edge of the chair and will fall off...poor Harry.
SpecialParanoia chapter 3 . 10/15/2003
*pouts* That was kinda' short... Oh well. It was still good! Hope to see another update soon!
samhaincat chapter 2 . 10/12/2003
ITA about Dobby and I'm enjoying your story, update soon please.
Englishgirl chapter 2 . 10/12/2003
this is well written. i hope you updat it soon
SpecialParanoia chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
Hm... Very interesting... I liket his. Hope you update soon!
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