Reviews for Mistress
Lord Lycaon chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Keep this going, man. Make this at least a two-shot!
Xenothefallenone chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
It might be my perverted alter-ego talking but you should go lemon. Your writing style(and the fact that a zelda/malon lemon is totally hot) would make it interesting.
Ganons shadow26 chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
A Lesbian Princess, never saw that one coming! (-_-) 7/10
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
LEMON! it was great!
Zeldadude47 chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
zelda and malon pairing ARE one of my favs and i have to say this is one of the best yet
The Acid Rabbit chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Man, I'd never thought about a Zelda yuri before. Great idea. Thought your story contains dozens of gramatical errors and you could be a lot more descriptive, you did a good job at telling the tale. Not bad.

Keep writing!
kefka-sprite chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
great story, hope to see more
Sir Steve777 chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
Great please write more!
Nny11 chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
First I've seen of this paring...Neato! This was a fun read intersting and new.I like it!
tx1253 chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
This was very well written, and like the Zel-Mal relationship, I'd like to see more of that, more lemon wouldn't be bad, either.
A pom chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
21-17! 21-17! 21-17! 21-17! 21-17!

And you thought we were boring...

21-17! 21-17! 21-17! 21-17! 21-17!


Oh, and learn some grammar.
Mad Dog Matteson chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
That was cool, but a little abrupt. MORE! MORE!
dan chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
continue! please this is very discriptive and i love it... (Do a lemon youd be good at it)
hamnaheo0987 chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
m, yummy! more! u r a good riter, more description an' more lemon plz!
Tifa chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
that was *cough* horridable*cough* don't you luv me spellin? -
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