Reviews for The First Time
devilangelchick chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
great chapter! so intense!
Dark Angel215 chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
Great story
Jeff's favourite skittle chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Oh, that was so good! The way you used repitition to your advantage, that was great. The opening scentences had me hooked from the beginning. How sad, who did Jeff cheat with? Maybe that's all apart of the mystery. Please keep up you amazing work.

~Fan 4 Life~

~Jeff's Favourite Skittle~
Cat Lea Takersdarkone chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
God this one is great. I really love your stories.
JeffAndShannon chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Oh! That's so good! And soo sad! Poor Jeffy! I love those two.