| Reviews for If only I had stayed with you |
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   ailalecarg chapter 7 . 2/1/2008 WO!Go Kagome! |
| Reaper Of Hades chapter 2 . 1/30/2007 ohh shit the basted better wach out now |
| Chibes chapter 7 . 2/2/2005 Watashi wa Kawai! This means I am cute! or I am so cute! or I am a cutie! Wait so is the guy dead or isn't he? |
| J.M.Sage chapter 7 . 11/25/2004 OMG! It has been a hear since you updated this fic! Plz start on it again! Here is an idea for the nect chapter: they go back to the feudal era and shippo has been abducted! Dun dun dun! this is really good! Plz update it! |
| ShotaroxPhillip chapter 7 . 10/23/2004 update |
| Inuyasha'sGirl15 chapter 7 . 9/4/2004 hey good story so far. I got an idea if you want it...the guy that came after Kagome could have seen her at the library (he could have been there to meet the author or he could be the author Rubicon Yamahas ) and to could follow her to finish what he started or something. But Inuyasha saves her. |
| White Chopsticks chapter 7 . 5/15/2004 Lol, that chapter DIDN'T have any meaning to it, but whatever. Where's this story going anyway? Is Inuyasha going to actually kill this guy? |
| White Chopsticks chapter 5 . 5/15/2004 Wow. I can tell you're not going to continue this story, but you should. I really like it...but Inuyasha is a little out of character, don't ya think? He's being a little too nice to Kagome, even though he loves her. ;-) |
| White Chopsticks chapter 2 . 5/15/2004 w0t! Go Inuyasha! _ And it's "cue", not "q". lol. |
| Plum Saotome chapter 7 . 2/15/2004 THAT WAS AN AWSOME CHAPTER! I still love this story! Its so kawaii! _ I hope that you update soon! |
| kagome234 chapter 7 . 1/30/2004 this is so good update very very very soon plz |
| Pokahydee chapter 7 . 12/3/2003 Hehe, writers block? Gomen, I know how that goes . that's why I only manage to update every month or two... That's also due to lack of time... specially with finals coming up next week . Anyway, this chapter wasn't really bad. Kinda like some of the filler episodes in the series ne? Well, good luck with your stories. ~ Pokahydee |
| Pokahydee chapter 5 . 12/3/2003 Another short one; There isn't much for me to comment on here either. I realize Kagome would be understanding toward Inuyasha but I don't think it would be quite like that; That's just not what I would imagine I suppose, but hey, it's your story ~. And I wonder about that myself. When he became full demon and killed all of those bandits, he felt aweful so why does he still want to become a full demon? Hmm... men... never know what they want. Well, gotta go. ~ Pokahydee |
| Pokahydee chapter 3 . 12/3/2003 o.O wow... a lil violent isn't he... *hides* Inuyasha's scary as full demon . Why does he want to become one so badly? *kicks him* He's cutest as a hanyou *glomps Inu-kun* Anyway, I noticed a few more typos and misused words again; I forget where, but there were a few. This chapter was kinda short and rushed, that's probably the thing you have to work on most with your writing. Spend more time describing things It adds so much to the story Well, gonna go read some more. ~ Pokahydee |
| Pokahydee chapter 2 . 12/3/2003 In that context it would be 'cue' instead of 'q' ; Everyone does silly stuff like that, at least you put a note with it ~. Also when he 'layed' her on the ground of the bathroom, it would actually be 'lay'. Inuyasha is a little OOC in here when he breaks down and says he's sorry he wasn't there. But anyway, I'm off to the next chapter... I have I have to go to class again . ~ Pokahydee |