Reviews for Forever the Tomboy
JPElles chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Update.
Jadedmagus chapter 12 . 6/8/2005
I absolutely love your story, it was one of the first Ranma/SailorMoon crossovers I have ever read, yet coming back and reading it again, it is still one of the best. I truely hope you were not too discouraged by your computer problems and can continue this to its end. I'll keep my fingers crossed ;)
fdsf chapter 8 . 6/7/2005
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The Secret Laranian chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Most excellent material with a very interesting premise. My general lack of knowledge of anime might have hidden some flaws, but I honestly don't think so. One of the best crossovers I have read in a while. Keep up with the good work, please.

P.S. And Mr. Pig really deserves a beating. Don't go easy with him.
Lerris chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Well I haven't reread Ch1 lately, but if you get time to work on this story, well, I thought it was quite good and would love to read a new chapter.
flashfroze chapter 12 . 4/26/2005
Wow! heh heh I guess Ryouga's finally got his comeuppance. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I also can't wait to find out what will happen between Ranma and Haruka once she finds out his past. I do hope they remain together... What I also find interesting is the 'developing romance' between Nodoka and Yosho... since Nodoka has some Jurain blood in her (courtesy of Funaho) she will live as long as Yosho... so I say "Go for it!" Let them have their fun...

Well, I've stated my comments and reviews so now its time for my queries.

Ranma will kill Ryouga, right? *hopefull sigh*

Will Ranma 'accidentally' unlock his original form and cause the entirety of the cast to go into schock (not for an indefinite time though... apparetnly there is the 'probability' of the Timeline as it is now from happening.)?

Finally, will the Inners be glare at Haruka for catching the heart of one of the most fantasized people in the entirety of the manga and anime world?

These are my main questions.. and the only ones I could think up now. Oh well... Can't wait for the next update. Good luck with the next chapter! And most importantly, have fun with this story. It is, after all, your story!

blaboy - _ extraordinaire! (no thats not right... oh well, until next time!)
EVILSOB chapter 12 . 4/23/2005
LOVE THE STORY, KEEP GOING!
Vampwriter chapter 12 . 4/21/2005
I loved every chapter of this story! I hope that Haruka makes the right decision and doesn't do something she's going to end up regreting. I'd also like to find out more about Nodoka's connection to Ayeka's family. This could make things so much more interesting.
Heaven's Wrath chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
perturbed is an idiot. The idea of fanfiction, or fiction in general is to do what you want. Nothing should limit one's imagination. And besides if you hate a certain kind of fiction, just stop reading them, no one is forcing you to read. And if you still can't accept that, than write your own story.
Bobboky chapter 12 . 4/15/2005
good story, i have a question though, how did ranma get over his fear of cats? did he/she go to a shrink as a young girl? or was regressing to the age of 6 and growing up in a better environment enough to cure it?
perturbed chapter 12 . 4/12/2005
I really can't see Ranma no Baka as Michiru because she so different from him. But the whole process by which Ranma becomes her is ridiculous enough for a Ranma story. I read another story in which time travel was used to make Ranma his own mother!

The problem with many of these stories is that they ignore the fact that Ranma 1/2 is a Japanese style slapstick comedy and they take Ranma and the events of his life too seriously. He himself, in his own way, is just as ridiculously obsessed as his mother. The obsession he has with being the greatest martial artist in the world is itself responsible for much of the fighting and destruction in Nerima. He even goaded Ryouga into fights so he could practice new techniques.

Many writers try to remake Ranma into a nicer smarter and more powerful person. Many have also reformed Nodoka into the perfect mother. Several writers have even writen stories in which Ranma becomes a god. Now when Ranma is made "perfect" there is no sane reason for anyone to get mad at him and hit him, so anyone who does, like Akane, is made to be a deranged lunatic who hits him for no reason.

I also think you've treated Ryouga very unfairly in your story. Though it's been done quite frequently in fanfiction, I've seen no evidence in the manga that every time Ryouga sees Ranma he tries to kill him. Although Ryouga is understandably suspicious of Ranma's intentions at times, they have also gotten along well together.

Tenchi's situation, especially with Ayeka and Ryoko, is also treated humorously in the manga.

Although this is an interesting story, I wish more people would treat the characters as their creators made them to be. Some people just want to kill off everyone in Nerima to get Ranma a new life.
Trugeta chapter 12 . 4/7/2005
This is a very good story. Took me some time to read it, but it was surely worth it. I like the idea how you integrated Ranma into the rank of the Senshi using the method of time travel. I doubt that anyone has ever had the idea of her becoming Michiru. And it makes sense for her to be together with Haruka, as Ranma likes girls in both forms.

I'm curious to see how Haruka will react to the full story of Ranma's past life, though I'm sure that Setsuna knows the truth more or less. After all, it would have been easy for her to check the gates of time.

I also liked how you intregrated the cast of Tenchi Muyo into this. It was also good to see that Nodoka took action regarding Genma, for that he had coming.

And finally, I'm looking forward to the fight between Ranma and Ryoga. Good work, update when you can.
Rubel chapter 12 . 4/7/2005
This is a really interesting story. I usually don't like the "Ranma is stuck as a girl" genre but this one does it well. Heck it takes the premise a few steps ahead. I really like how you are fleshing things out and the hinting of Ranma having an Amazon past. Can't wait for more. Thanks for the Good Read.
dogbertcarroll chapter 12 . 3/4/2005
Good chapter. I favor permanent pig myself. He could also just move Ryoga forward

in time. Drop Ryoga a couple of years in the future (20 would work) and the situation

pretty much takes care of itself.
leeyiankun chapter 12 . 3/3/2005
About Nodaka's OOC, GXP is legally canon meterial right now. The Maker of Tenchimuyo said so.

Too bad how it takes so much potential off the Tenchi's universe. You might want to get your hands on it though, it is considered CANON anyway.

As well as some of the novels.

I recommend you ignore the Canon thing, since you can claim AU to ignore any changes in the offical Tenchi universe. It is still unfinished after all, and can still change.
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