Reviews for To Have been Loved
WillowRubyBelle chapter 3 . 9/4/2008
Pikachu is SO funny! Ash got a date with Lily... Sorry, it's still registering... A-s-h g-o-t a d-a-t-e w-i-t-h L-i-l-y...? ... WHAT?

17 seconds later...

Um... Good fic! Keep it up!

WiloowRubyBelle -x-
SSJ4Gohan2 chapter 2 . 9/23/2004
Hey guys, I know i havent updated in a long its just that i got really busy so i couldnt find time to get the fourth chapter up. Oh and for all of you wondering why ash is working at mcdonalds its because he cant not work for long periods of time. he's not a work a holic but not too far from one.
o.O weired chapter 3 . 1/27/2004
Its a a good story but why McDonald's?
And didn''t Lance say Ash still gets paid?
update soon
anabell chapter 3 . 1/26/2004
I like this story a lot hope that u up date soon
jade destiny chapter 3 . 1/18/2004
i been checkin back at this site again and again and again bah its been the same again and again and again. please hurry up wit the next chapter and more so i can check back and read it cux i been checkin back all the time bah its been the same old chapter. i read this chapter lyke 5 times already...
Kira Saiai chapter 3 . 12/23/2003
I guess the story was okay. Why did Ash ask Lily out anyway?
jade destiny chapter 3 . 12/13/2003
ok..this story isnt that great..sorry. BUT..i am readin this and i want u to hurry and continue wit the story and please hurry so i can read. im waiting to read it cux i wanna see what happens between ash and misty..especially if she's married and he's goin out wit her sista..i so wanna know what happens next so please hurry up _
Spiraea Kozak chapter 3 . 12/11/2003
please update... theres your 13th reply.. i read your story trice... and now im quite sad... i hope you will make it happy in the end...
Spiraea Kozak chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
can i ask a few questions? its really important... it will determine whether i want to read this fic... cuz i get depressions easily... so... here goes...
will ash and misty get together in the end?
if no, im not reading... i'll get depressed...
if yes, is it that one of them is dying?
if yes, im not reading... i'll get depressed...
if no, do they have to part eventually?
if yes, im not reading... i'll get depressed...
if no, i will read... but i think you will come up with sometime to make me depressed without killing one of them and even make them get together...
so... please eh?
TriangledYume chapter 3 . 12/6/2003
Ash is going out with LILY! Or is going. whatever. The suspense of this story! Update soon! -~
Gopu chapter 3 . 12/6/2003
Great story.
togepi4eva chapter 3 . 12/6/2003
Where's my candy? Just kidding. Ash and LILY? That is wierd. Nice story so far though. Oh and where is Tracey. And how old is Lily? And what about Togepi?
SM together chapter 2 . 10/29/2003
Perhaps you should make the chapters longer. That would help. Very interesting plot. Usually people just make them BF and GFs so that the hero gets the girl in the end.
Maia's Pen chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Gohan-

Hey! Nice lead. My interest has officially be snagged.

When will you be updating?
Michelle chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Cool!and I mean COOL! You just have to do the next chapter...but just make it the chapters a little longer!OKAY! Ohh... I got to go my favorite Slipknot song is on!( and I really Like Slipknot!)
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