Reviews for The day my world collapsed
goldengreaser chapter 4 . 7/15/2005
Ya it's depressing anough.I like this soon please.
Karlei Shaynner chapter 7 . 11/30/2003
EXCELLENT!
Hallelujah89 chapter 4 . 11/25/2003
ah you made me cry! ur good. good job.

~E~
k00lgirl1808 chapter 7 . 11/23/2003
it was good I liked that you left off were the book started
alyssaloo chapter 7 . 11/23/2003
Good book. The ending was sort of weird...didn't make sence. But I loved it!
anigrl2003 chapter 5 . 11/15/2003
Poor Sodapop...and Darry. I don't care about Ponyboy. Steve is such a good friend...trying to comfort Soda...I'd probably be crying myself in that situation.
Gone With The Wind chapter 6 . 11/11/2003
oh no hes going to break it off aint he?
Gone With The Wind chapter 5 . 11/11/2003
oh his nightmares are starting

poor baby
Gone With The Wind chapter 4 . 11/11/2003
yes yes it was depressing enough!
Gone With The Wind chapter 3 . 11/11/2003
yeah u couldve made it sadder mazz but that was good anyway
Gone With The Wind chapter 2 . 11/11/2003
oh no
Gone With The Wind chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
his parents are lovely!
alyssaloo chapter 6 . 11/6/2003
oh! my friend linda will be soo mad when she sees that another woman is going with another woman :D...well, really good..update son!
Le Count chapter 6 . 11/5/2003
oh Darry gave up love for his brothers! what a man!
ThuperJapanican chapter 6 . 11/3/2003
JEEZ!

That's so sad... i like the setting though. It's really believable... Update soon!
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