Reviews for The Hall of Mirrors
chshrkitten chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
You did a wonderful job in this story of keeping the emotions running high without making it seem like a soap opera. Scenes this intense can be difficult to write, but you managed it well!
MusicalMaryann chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
An interesting read. Forsyth did indeed 'under-write' his book.

I wish there was more 'Phantom of Manhattan' fanfiction- particularly that where the plot changes leading to a whole other outcome.

Well done! :)
Lisa chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Trinity Destler chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
Well that was only about ten gazillion times better then that awful book. You COULD continue this and change the rather unbelievable ending into something as wonderful as this was. PLEASE! Masterfully writen and the dialog well manipulated back into the art it was supposed to be.
AriesSolar chapter 1 . 8/25/2002
Now see, Forsyth, THAT is how you write a book! God, I could not STAND Phantom of Manhattan...but, that's not the point. *Ahem* Wonderful job! Loved it! If only that had actually happened...*mutters dark things*
T'eyla Minh chapter 1 . 11/3/2001
As a great believer of "fixes", this is one of my favourites. I read that novel in a day and this is the only scene I actually remember (apart from that awful, evil ending, of course...) Very well fixed indeed, mam'selle. I could FEEL that as Christine does, especially the very last few paragraphs. Wonderful! J'adore!
Midasgirl chapter 1 . 8/26/2001
wow! considering how bad the novel is and how unrealistic the dialogue is (sorry, I speak as I find) this is a fantastic fic! more please!
MayaHJ7 chapter 1 . 4/10/2001
One word: Wow! Considering that the book was not that good, you turned one of th better scenes into a much better scene then Forysth's entire novel. Great job!

jemetc chapter 1 . 3/2/2001
oh wow! i love it!
waiting4morning chapter 1 . 1/4/2001
Hiya Crys! I've told you before (as "Angel of the Opera" at CD's board) but here it is anyway: I love this story! Too bad Forsyth had to write the Phantom of Manhatten for this phic to come about. ;-)
Kalina LaReine chapter 1 . 1/1/2001
good job!