Reviews for Remembrances
denise chapter 1 . 8/27/2001
the story is good, but please do something about the paragraphing!
Chikorita chapter 1 . 5/19/2001
Better if everytime someone talks to start a new paragraqh. I keep getting lost and had to reread some parts always. And l never knew that Mew and Mewtwo are brothers, or is that made up?
Lira chapter 1 . 9/24/2000
That was a good story, like your other fanfics. You probably know what I'm gonna give you now, so, I won't bother. Keep on writing! :)
PoKeNovice chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Pleeeeeease start a new paragraph each time someone speaks, or at least divide this story into three different paragraphs. I kept losing my place!