Reviews for Too Late
passing reader chapter 6 . 8/21/2007
Hey, this is pretty awesome! I just got back into a big Skies of Arcadia mood and decided to go looking for some Ramirez fics... and stumbled upon this one. It's awesome; I hope you get around to finishing it!
Deshwitat'slover chapter 6 . 1/26/2007
Meneil chapter 6 . 10/2/2006
Aah I always love these 'what if' types of stories...

Your story is great! The details really make me feel the flow of the story. Where IS Ramirez anyway? Hopefully he'll make it in time before everyone dies...
Untainted Mind chapter 6 . 6/30/2006
Hey nice fic! I haven't read any RamirezxFina fic before and they're my favourite couple! Please continue the fic and make more about them too! Heeheehee, please continue!
charm chapter 6 . 4/19/2006
pls continue writting. even though i've just read it i was totally amazed...
Vegetachick91 chapter 6 . 7/19/2004
make next chap please
ramirez fanatic chapter 4 . 4/27/2004
great, ramirez is my fav. video game char he's so cool and i def. like ramirez/fina- ramirez was def. screwed out of getting her but anyhow great fic!
Silver Chaotic chapter 6 . 3/6/2004
-The one who was called Chibi Turtle, but now is not.
Desert Lynx chapter 6 . 2/6/2004
You like doing alternate future stories, eh? It's another good one, but make the chapters a bit longer, please!
Wing Zero Alpha chapter 6 . 12/18/2003
Hey man, been a while. Glad to see you're still writing this. Onto the chapter. Great job with Ramierz's psychological drama. It highlighted on all the important points in his life with great detail, and it really did feel like it happened like a dream rather than a string of flashbacks that people like to use (thank you Gundam Wing _ ).
As for the battle itself, I was sorta hoping for your take on the Delphinus' battle with Zelos, but I can see ship-to-ship combat isn't your preferred field. Understandable. And the feeling toward the final fight is far different. With Ramierz, you knew you had to kill him, but with Fina, I can see Vyse seriously being affected by this. I guess the only complaint I do have is there seems to be no difference in Zelos' combat style (he's still using the Silver Nightmare and Silver Binds*). I thought with Fina, Zelos would fight differently somehow. But, the fight just started so I could very much be wrong.
I look forward to your next chapter.
Jade130too lazy to sign in chapter 6 . 12/17/2003
Gasp! How dare you leave us with a cliff hanger! I wanna know how it turns out!
Saridaru-chan chapter 6 . 12/17/2003
Good...I really can't think of anything right now. :p
One more chapter after this? Aww... :D
Wing Zero Alpha chapter 2 . 11/22/2003
PS - Ignore the critiques I've made towards your story. It doesn't matter.
Wing Zero Alpha chapter 5 . 11/22/2003
Wow, cool. I just completed the Moonfish side quest myself, and damn. I usually expect twists like this miles away, but I never, EVER, expected Mendosa to be that heartless. That really makes you feel for Ramierz. Anyway, you wrote that little 'event' rather well. Please, continue. This is one of the few stories over all I find original and very entertaining. Not much of an honor, I know, but...continue writing!

Deep Inside chapter 4 . 11/22/2003
The story's beginning to get interesting...WRITE MORE!
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