Reviews for Adventure Inc Story 1
kas chapter 4 . 9/24/2005
good story, please carry on. Can't wait to see who got shot.
bastet chapter 3 . 4/20/2004
What's next?
AllyKitty chapter 3 . 11/28/2003
Hey, I like your story so far. I'm dying to know what the doctor has to say, so if you could update as soon as you have the chance, that would be great!
Wolf Jade chapter 3 . 10/30/2003
hey like the story please update
Evil Attack Penguin chapter 3 . 10/26/2003
Not bad, exept space out the first chapter a little better. _
vonnie836 chapter 3 . 10/20/2003
Okay, so tell me, what does the doctor have to tell them? Don't let me wait too long, please!
vonnie836 chapter 2 . 10/20/2003
Just discovered this story, wonderful job. I hope school will give you some time and you can update soon. I can't wait to find out who will get shot - Rei or Judson or maybe one of the others? Don't let me hand in suspense too long.
shebajcf chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Are you gonna make this into a full blown story? Cos that would be really cool! Please continue with this okay..