Reviews for Thougths on Loss
Ghostwriter chapter 3 . 8/20/2008
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
a-blackpanther chapter 3 . 1/3/2004
I missed this story when you first wrote it. Anyway it was...i think your best story. You captured their feelings very well!
brennan mulwray chapter 3 . 10/14/2003
aw! thats so sad! its really good, but its really sad! good job though! :D :D :D
Psionic-Wrath chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
Just a smidgen to much of clich├ęd primordial angst. Try to add more value to feelings of misery, so as to avoid siphoning characters of personality.
lornein chapter 3 . 10/13/2003
Very good and accurate character sketching!