Reviews for Unaccountable Effect
nu chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
You captured Will perfectly. I've been looking for a "third season" Will story and I'm glad I read yours first. I'm thinking about writing one myself. Excellent work.
pharo chapter 1 . 10/13/2003

I felt so sad for Will, or the shell of Will, that you portrayed. It was realistic though and I could understand Will wanting to remain numb as opposed to taking an active role in his life once more.

Love that you didn't write him off as being in Witness Protection like the writers in spyville - the Amy message was a nice touch. It was an especially awesome that you had Jack be the one to break everything to Will as opposed to some random agent.

And that ending - that's exactly what I want to see happen on the show if the Willage is back. I want a call out of nowhere and the repercussions of Will leaving his new life long enough to visit the old one.

Rach chapter 1 . 10/13/2003

Beautiful, as always.

I miss Will, too. :)