|Reviews for A Family of His Own|
| Rachel73 chapter 5 . 5/3/2010
Wow, so good!Best fanfic yet :D
Plz make more chapters!
| Abby chapter 5 . 5/2/2010
I LOVED it! Please please PLEASE make more chapters of it!
| consuelo marquez chapter 5 . 4/29/2010
are you gonna write any more chpaters ?
| Ana chapter 5 . 4/7/2010
you are awesome please make another chapter if you want more inspiration watch inuyasha and kagome videos on you tube and besides you are brilliant i am sure you will be abell to come up with something awesome so keep on writing and i will keep on reading :) XD
| Shelby chapter 5 . 2/21/2010
That is SO sweet! Inuyasha actually has a soft side! One question, though... how did he know Kagome was pregnant again? I mean, was it like, sense of smell, or something?
| Shelby chapter 2 . 2/21/2010
Kinky! LOL! ;)
| breanna chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
that story was great well can you please add to it i love it i want to see what happens please you are a great writer
| jackiemc chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
You can't leave me hanging like this. More please. MORE please. MORE PLEASE!
(sigh) ... I'll try to wait.
Please hurry. :)
| jackiemc chapter 4 . 2/8/2010
I have just joined FanFiction and I have found your Inuyasha stories; and I love them.
You have real talent - I stay engrossed and can 'see' the action of the story ( I am a visual person by nature).
Minimal spelling or punctuation errors.
This is great stuff and I hope you are pursuing writing as a career.
Keep up the good work!
| Secretfanficaddict chapter 5 . 11/28/2009
i absolutely love the advantage you took with this story. this was and stands to be the ony fanfiction i have read for the inuyasha series. i wouldn't want to spoil the after effects of the anime. however, a absolutely hate to be left hanging. in my opinion, it seems that you are truely a very creative person, and i think you should continue where you left off! you stuck true to the characters, emotions, and story line. i'll have to read some more of your 12 stories. i can't waait to see what else you can come up with!
Best wishes to you and yours.
| oniko chapter 4 . 9/21/2009
i luv this story it great!
| SW chapter 5 . 7/28/2009
I think that you should finish out the journey for the last shard, then go through only the main events as each of the pups grows up. When the pups are finally all grown up, then you could tell about how they each either move away or live choose to live with their parents and about the paths the take in life. You could say whether they choose to get married and have children or stay single. YOu could even go further to say if they are content to be single/married or not. There and endless possibilities for the pups to come accross exciting situations, fully grown or not. While they grow up, you could describe their senses sharpening and what puberty is like for them as their bodies begin to change. By the way, love your story. I would like to write a few fanfics of my own but I don't know things like if you have to get permission from the Rumiko Takahashi or not and what to write in the disclaimer.
| Emily chapter 5 . 7/5/2009
I was so sad when the chapter ended here. I wanted it to go on! You are an amazing writer and you HAVE to write more! I am a Inuyasha MANIAC an you satisfied me to my limits! You are amazing!
| sophie chapter 5 . 5/30/2009
this is so awsome i hope you come up wit more
| brandi chapter 5 . 12/17/2008
this was the best ever! please write some more!please,please,PLEASE!