Reviews for Totured Past
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
Impossible to read and didn't really do much development on the character
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Very, uh, nice, but try making the first letters of names capitol letters.

But other than that, great job!
Blayke chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
this was REALLY good. It was sad, thinking about a little girl in such a horrible fire. I almost cried. :( but it was good, i liked it.
sulietsexual chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
I liked the story-line, but you really need to flesh it out - it seems very rough. A good premise though.
Krazy4marilyn chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
That was awsome! I've seen the craft so many times that I've memorized the movie and you've done such a good job. I'm impressed.
zibby chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
very very good chapter :) plz rite a new chapter soon!
nadia chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
I thought it was good very descriptional one word of advice though use a spell check cause its not very good spelling
Lorbin Goddess chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
really well written. very nice description of the fire.
maxie chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
That was really touching, and sweet. Keep writing the good stuff, cos there's not much out there...

An yes, i know that many others have probably said this, but try separating out the text next time.

Kerribolt chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Lovely! Lovely, Shawn! It's great.
Invader Nence chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Wow... hun...

Okay. That was... emotional! I liked it... alot.. And even tho I'm not your FIRST review, I'll be okay!

Much love,

Your Biggest Fan.


~~Fee Noire~~
Su Kaimu chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Hey! I like your story. My only problem with it is that it's a wall of text. :(
Seer99999 chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Great story.

It fit everything well.

Also doing great for the explanation of how bonnie might have got her scars.

Good story.

Keep on writing more fics like this.