|Reviews for I Hate Everything About You|
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/14
This story wasn't too bad...until this chapter. Even though Hermione and Draco were ridiculously OOC, your writing is good enough to ignore that.
But my pet peeve is when a writer decides that they want to add a romantic piano piece. Firstly, it's always overly mushy and cliché. Also, where did this notion that any musician can pull a piece out of their ass at a moment's notice come from? It takes years of training in that particular subject to get good at all at it. Unless you're a prodigy, but NO ONE can just sit at the piano after a few childhood lessons and be the next Berlioz. Also, a music room? How mundane and overused.
| Beatus.DeAlatum chapter 19 . 2/21
HAHAHHA I LIKE THE LAST BIT! Awesome story btw! Tbh Im kind of confused with the story and everything but i think i understood the basic plot.
| kez chapter 19 . 2/10
So I just finished the story. I really liked the first few chapters an found myself addicted after th make out scene which was really good. It was well written but at times really confusing. I liked how Draco portrayal by I am not sure I it suited him. In defo think he would be the dominate smart ass arrogant type but but I feel he showed his feeling so quickly do her. He kept telling her he liked her. I feel like it started out strong by fizzled toward the last 5 or so chapters. Th sex scene weirded me out since all I was picturing was a frail anorexic Hermione and that wasn't hot to me. Also it was so short. I feel like th sex scene should have been like the make out scene with not aggression. I mean they are suppose to release all the sexual frustration they had for each other. I feel like they both caved so easy a well. Like Draco pretty much accepted his feeling right away. There should have been more heated confrontation between them as enemies. I mean a staying contest doesn't set a scene that they had that sexual frustration manifesting as hatred turned to a hot an Harvey relationship vibe. I think you should write another on because Punjab potential to write great stories. I don't know if you read Peter Pan fanfiction, but weezers42 wrote a really great fan fiction "All because of Thimble" that I think would help you understand the potential their relationship had. There is another Peter Pan fan fiction that was Amazon but I can't remember the author! Good luck with all future projects!
| kez chapter 15 . 2/9
I don't understand how Harry and Ron got to Crack house in chapter 15. So confused
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/30
Not a surprise, I must admit.
EVEN WITHOUT GRAVITY ON EARTH, Draco Malfoy would still fall in love with Hermione Granger.
| Good.girl chapter 4 . 1/30
SCREAMING. CRYING. PERFECT STORY.
| good.girl chapter 3 . 1/30
I am enjoying Lavender and Parvati's comments hahah.
Draco is a hero, isn't he?
That scene was so cute. Love it!
Keep doing such a idyllic job, dear.
| Good.girl chapter 2 . 1/30
Brazilian reader here!
‘‘You are filthy but you are beautiful’’ stole my heart faster than you can say sabotage.
| Akemi831Sato chapter 19 . 1/12
Waiting for the sequel...
How long am I gonna wait?
Please DO IT!
| CissyTrix chapter 6 . 10/17/2014
AWESOME DO MORE!
| CheckersChance chapter 13 . 10/9/2014
| PenguinGirl94 chapter 19 . 10/6/2014
Holy freaking crap! Why!? I had a total love-hate relationship with this story. On one hand I loved every moment of it.. on the other I wanted to stangle characters for there stupidness. The only dramione story I can think of that gave me such heart-ache and panic was written by Emerald Kisses (Merry Christmas Mr. Malfoy, and the sequel to it written). Good heavens what are you trying to do to me?! There was however one chaper where I was compleatly lost, and not that I'm at my computer and not my phone I'll go back a try to comment… Oh and gross.. the idea of Harry and Hermione being togeather… yuck. I liked the Quidich scene where Draco saved Hermione and one up'd Harry. And how you brought it all togeather by having Harry tell Draco that he caught the golden snich (Hermione). However, If she was dizzy from not eating for so long, how did Hermione have the strenght to … with Draco on the piano…? I also liked the Pavarti/Lavendar additions to the story, they were small yet they made me smile. The sorting hat song thing was a little confusing, I think that's the chaper I was lost in. I would've been helpful to know at the begining of the chaper that I was reading italics from the hat… It wasn't till I got to the bottom that I realized who was talking, and by then I was too confused and frusterated to re-read. So I basically only got the jist of the sorting hat's song. And really what was the point of the Sytherin/Gryffindor war? They are still rivals, and they were still fighting in the hallways… I wish Draco and Hermione had been more lovely/protective of eachother during the battle. Oh and the graduates' name's writen on the ceiling was a cool addition. :) Otherwise I hope you've written more Dramione stories because I'm about to dive in if thats the case.
Thanks for the great story!
A Dramione Lover
| Silvershine Moonlight chapter 19 . 8/18/2014
| Hannah chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
| Dorawc chapter 13 . 7/17/2014
why is malfoy so stupid in this story.
why do you use the unforgivable so easily like normal spells?
i was hoping ur story is a good one..
turns out i was wrong