Reviews for After love
pstibbons chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Nice fic - though the song/poem at the end really spoiled it
GeorgysGirl chapter 2 . 10/16/2003
I really enjoyed this - just as much as Part 1. I'd be interested to see what happens when Daniel tells Jack about Natalie.

I'm guessing they're going to start re-building their relationship and if I were her, I would want people to know, especially since she isn't going to be at SGC anymore. You write her with a real sense of vunerability which I love.

I appreciate you writing this so much.
GeorgysGirl chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
OK. I'm guessing you wrote it as a stand alone piece but since I'm a hopeless romantic and actually quite like the character of Natalie, I would be interested to see this go another step further. You've got a real gift for writing, I love reading your stuff, and your flair for description makes Natalie real not just some Mary Sue. She definitely isn't that! So, if you happen to have another surge of inspiration on this I would love to read it.