Reviews for One Wish
Karsus chapter 2 . 5/2/2004
Hm...
i seriously doubt that ranma could be more understanding of someone granted martial arts ability, when she didn't have any real talent for it to begin with, and hasn't worked for years to achieve those abilities.
Shampoo for example, has worked hard for her abilities.
chapter 3... the curse idea is amusing.
though i still don't see why Ranma would ever want to marry Akane. She hasn't done anything in the whole series that would inspire love in someone, unless he was malfunctioning(of course, Ranma is malfunctioning emotionally/socially so it's possible)
chapter 4... akane's suddenly started acting like she has a brain... bizarre, also she's taking the curse far too well.. no one would take such a curse easily.
anyway... terminating this review :)
take care
Captain Tsubasa chapter 8 . 5/2/2004
There's something called "The Delete Key" I suggest using it for all the text in your story.
lordkazar chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
i will make this one simple..More Pls
dogbertcarroll chapter 4 . 1/7/2004
Too scattered. It's more like bits and pieces
of a story then an actual story.
psychedelic aya chapter 4 . 11/27/2003
Uh-oh... hehehe... panic does lead to misunderstandings and misleads... hehe... can't wait for the next chappiE!
crosseyedbutterfly2lazy2signin chapter 4 . 11/26/2003
Wow, that was hilarious! Ranman being confidnet, Akane having control of her tmeper, and both of them now having the opposite curse...that could lead to some very interesting circumstances. Kasumi's teasing Akane was great too, please keep going! Can't wait to see where it leads.
KiranAven chapter 3 . 11/3/2003
oh this could get interesting if i don't say so my self

update soon

ja ne
Akane-st chapter 3 . 10/21/2003
interesting, really interesting :) I like the way Urb intend to solve ranma and akane's problems, it will be funny

keep on!
ShadowCrawler chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
Great story. How are Ranma's fiacnes going to react when they see the changes? Update soon.
Velocity River chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
AW POOR THING! What's going to happen!
dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 10/17/2003
It would have been better if Nabiki had walked

in on him and screemed for help because there

was a pervert in the bathroom. Hehehe.

Ranma knocking out a male Akane and Kasumi

spilling tea on the sleeping pervert before the

cops could be called.
dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 10/17/2003
The bit with the curse water was good.

Showing Akane in no uncertain terms

what it's like in his shoes should

work. The spells for controlling

her temper and his mouth seem like

cheats tho'. There should have been

some plan and course of action to

where they were forced to learn to

control themselves. Character development

is best when worked slowly.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
I've never bought them as a fated couple but

this does look like it's going to be an

entertaining fic!
psychedelic aya chapter 3 . 10/16/2003
Cool! Gods and goddesses! Heheh! Nice start, continue soon! :D
Nikka chapter 3 . 10/16/2003
AGH! It's too short! Please please please please please make the next chappy. longer!
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