|Reviews for One Wish|
| Karsus chapter 2 . 5/2/2004
i seriously doubt that ranma could be more understanding of someone granted martial arts ability, when she didn't have any real talent for it to begin with, and hasn't worked for years to achieve those abilities.
Shampoo for example, has worked hard for her abilities.
chapter 3... the curse idea is amusing.
though i still don't see why Ranma would ever want to marry Akane. She hasn't done anything in the whole series that would inspire love in someone, unless he was malfunctioning(of course, Ranma is malfunctioning emotionally/socially so it's possible)
chapter 4... akane's suddenly started acting like she has a brain... bizarre, also she's taking the curse far too well.. no one would take such a curse easily.
anyway... terminating this review :)
| Captain Tsubasa chapter 8 . 5/2/2004
There's something called "The Delete Key" I suggest using it for all the text in your story.
| lordkazar chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
i will make this one simple..More Pls
| dogbertcarroll chapter 4 . 1/7/2004
Too scattered. It's more like bits and pieces
of a story then an actual story.
| psychedelic aya chapter 4 . 11/27/2003
Uh-oh... hehehe... panic does lead to misunderstandings and misleads... hehe... can't wait for the next chappiE!
| crosseyedbutterfly2lazy2signin chapter 4 . 11/26/2003
Wow, that was hilarious! Ranman being confidnet, Akane having control of her tmeper, and both of them now having the opposite curse...that could lead to some very interesting circumstances. Kasumi's teasing Akane was great too, please keep going! Can't wait to see where it leads.
| KiranAven chapter 3 . 11/3/2003
oh this could get interesting if i don't say so my self
| Akane-st chapter 3 . 10/21/2003
interesting, really interesting :) I like the way Urb intend to solve ranma and akane's problems, it will be funny
| ShadowCrawler chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
Great story. How are Ranma's fiacnes going to react when they see the changes? Update soon.
| Velocity River chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
AW POOR THING! What's going to happen!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 10/17/2003
It would have been better if Nabiki had walked
in on him and screemed for help because there
was a pervert in the bathroom. Hehehe.
Ranma knocking out a male Akane and Kasumi
spilling tea on the sleeping pervert before the
cops could be called.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 10/17/2003
The bit with the curse water was good.
Showing Akane in no uncertain terms
what it's like in his shoes should
work. The spells for controlling
her temper and his mouth seem like
cheats tho'. There should have been
some plan and course of action to
where they were forced to learn to
control themselves. Character development
is best when worked slowly.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
I've never bought them as a fated couple but
this does look like it's going to be an
| psychedelic aya chapter 3 . 10/16/2003
Cool! Gods and goddesses! Heheh! Nice start, continue soon! :D
| Nikka chapter 3 . 10/16/2003
AGH! It's too short! Please please please please please make the next chappy. longer!