|Reviews for The Legend of the Three Souls|
| Mulanzu chapter 30 . 10/9/2010
Well I havta say, it was a very fun and adventurous story. It kinda sounded like a mix between Lord of The Rings vs. The Mummy 2.
Very interesting indeed. I love how you portrayed Bakura's character, but he went from being villainous and quite evil (with the whole stabbing of a poor innocent man and wanting to kill him [Odion]), to somewhat of a hero quite quickly. I would have liked to see more character development there. But meh, I liked that he became nicer in the end so what am I babbling about o_O
I adore Bakura/Tea, but I'm more into romance stories about them with a little action. This was the opposite of that, action before romance, but I did love their little moments, I just wish there had of been more *sniff* ... yeah, yeah, I know... This was more of an adventure story than romance, but I'll read any story that has Bak/Tea pairing.
However, I will not read a Kaiba/Serenity fic (hate that couple). I did read all of the story, including their miny romance scenes (or where they O_o), but if I was to ever read this story again, I would skip those parts _ lol One time is enough haha
The last 11 or 12 chap's, especially the battle scenes were a little slow paced. I know you said the you don't like to rush scenes, and even if the story started of slow in general, it flowed. I liked that. But the rest was a bit too slow, I had to take a lot of breaks when reading it :P
Anyways, it is a good story, but I wont be putting it on my favorites because, as I said before, I only favorite romance stories because they are the one's I crave to read over and over, and there was more action in this than romance.
Also, there were a few spelling mistakes, but this made me laugh the most, in chapter 18, instead of "blond journalist" your wrote "blue journalist" lol Mai is blue hehe
All this being said, I actually wish this was a film... It would make a really good film ( with a little more romance ;) )... yeah I'm a hopeless romantic).
Oh! And I loved Shadi in this! :D
Ah, and ya know when you see a really good film, lets take Indiana Jones for example. He has found a romantic interest in like a different country and ya think well he's gonna stay with her and it ends there with a happy ending and you us your imaginations on what happens next (marriage etc). Then they bring out a sequel, where he's in a new country with a new romantic interest and the 1st woman is nowhere to be found (kinda like James Bond also). Well the end of your story kinda gave of that vibe cos I know there isn't a sequel. So I hope Bak/Tea and Joey and Mai stay together forever in Egypt in your AU _
I hope you don't take what I said too seriously, (even though you probably don't care anymore since this is such an old story haha) these are just minor things that bothered me.
And that's all :D
| 1angelette chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Intriguing summary, disappointing first chapter. I haven't entirely abandoned your work... yet.
| dArkliTe-sPirit chapter 30 . 9/3/2005
Faved! Was super!...very...tired...(falls on keyboard)hnj btgyhtb
| XxTaishoNanamixX chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I loved it. it made me feel as if i was in the story actually experiencing it. keep up the good work!
| Insanity Rose Sparkles chapter 30 . 4/18/2005
OMG I love you *huggles* and I love this fic *huggles* and I love Bakura *hugs* - okay ... you get the point. *hugs the damn computer*
I would just like to tell you Congrats on this wicked fic! I liked all of your action scenes (gimme a woop woop)and you made the characters interesting and realistic. Please keep writing!
I'm glad I made you laugh, 'tis my duty to make peoples happy!
[insert corny superhero music]
Anyways, I must be off...toodles! -
Up, up and away! *flys off*
| tombrobber chapter 30 . 4/17/2005
Well, let'sa see, how do I put it...THAT ROCKED!
| YumeTakato chapter 30 . 4/17/2005
I like trying to be a faithful reviewer. and I'm glad I made ya think. 3
This fic is definitly an accomplishement. It was set up and done well, and it ended almost sort of like the series did in a way. -Either that, or perhaps the way one could see the true end of Yugioh going. 3
I've been a bit behind in fic reading, so I apologize for not reviewing a chapter or so ago. but myah, as I've said, I'm behind in fic reading (like.. a week e.e0)
| reenas-as chapter 30 . 4/16/2005
So sad... it's over now... isn't it funny how we can't wait to reach the end of a good story - we have to know what happens! - and then afterwards we're sad that it's over and wish it had lasted longer? Another wonderful story. But I cry foul! Not nearly enough fluff ~.
| Keoi chapter 30 . 4/16/2005
That was awesome! So sad it's finally over though :( What happens to the romances though, like Tea and Bakura? I mean half of them are leaving Egypt... Well I'm looking forward to reading your other works. Thanks for taking those two years to write this, it was worth it _
| OfCakeAndIceCream chapter 30 . 4/16/2005
You got it right _ It's sad that such a wonderful story had to end but that doesn't change the fact that it was effin amazing! Beautiful beautiful work!
| reenas-as chapter 28 . 4/15/2005
... evil semi cliffy! If this is the end I expect some fluff in the next chapter! I'[m not sure where, but I'm positive I was promised fluff! Nice chapter BTW _ You rock Alena!
| Keoi chapter 28 . 4/13/2005
That was so COOL! But what about Seto, Yugi, and Bakura? O.o They're coming back right? I liked how you had Bakura be the 3rd soul rather than Joey, a very pleasant suprise. YaY Marik's alive! Can't wait til you update again! :D
| DojomistressAmbyChan chapter 28 . 4/13/2005
DAMN! Now that was a good chapter! OMG everyones back, the bad guys dead, and even Malik made it back! WOOT! OMG kick ass chapter, but the other guys are still alive too right? Wow that was one of the best chapters, ever! Please please update again soon! And really, your b-day is august 15th then? we're both leo's!
| Insanity Rose Sparkles chapter 28 . 4/13/2005
OMG that kicked butt!
WOO HOO they're all alive, I knew you wouldn't kill Marik or the others off. Well, actually i'm a liar. Haha Amukh, he deserves everything he got. Anywho, please update soon.
| OfCakeAndIceCream chapter 28 . 4/12/2005
yay! They're back! UPDATE